Re: [Pce] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-yang-09.txt

[Dhruv Dhody <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom, 

> >
> > The draft does not have any other pending actions.
> 
> Mmm why can I not resist the challenge?
> 

[[Dhruv Dhody]] I am glad you took the challenge and pointed these out :), I will update them along with the forthcoming yangdoctor's review!

Thanks! 
Dhruv 

> You say
>    RFC Ed.: In this section, replace all occurrences of 'XXXX' with the
>    actual RFC number ...
> and then
>     import ietf-te {    prefix "te";    reference "RFC XXXX";    }
>     import ietf-te-types {     prefix "te-types";    reference "RFC
> XXXX";
>     import ietf-tls-server {   prefix "tls-server";    reference "RFC
> XXXX";   }
>     import ietf-tls-client {    prefix "tls-client";     reference "RFC
> XXXX";
> 
> Mmm I think not!
> 
> And, I like all the references in the YANG module but they need to be in
> the references of the I-D.  I think you are missing
> 
> 3209
> 5088
> 5089
> 5520
> 5541
> 5557
> 6536
> 8232
> 8306
> 
> while
> 8253
> is there but Informative; my preference is for such references to be
> Normative.
> 
> A common practice is to have a section just prior to the module proper
> which gives references to all the RFC which the module references, which
> obviates the appearance of warnings about  'Unused Reference'.
> 
> Tom Petch
> 
> 
> > Dhruv
> > PS. The yang errors in the datatracker are in the imported yang
> modules.
> >
> > On Mon, Oct 15, 2018 at 6:32 PM <[e-mail]> wrote:
> >
> > >
> > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > > directories.
> > > This draft is a work item of the Path Computation Element WG of the
> IETF.
> > >
> > >         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Path Computation
> Element
> > > Communications Protocol (PCEP)
> > >         Authors         : Dhruv Dhody
> > >                           Jonathan Hardwick
> > >                           Vishnu Pavan Beeram
> > >                           Jeff Tantsura
> > >         Filename        : draft-ietf-pce-pcep-yang-09.txt
> > >         Pages           : 116
> > >         Date            : 2018-10-15
> > >
> > > Abstract:
> > >    This document defines a YANG data model for the management of
> Path
> > >    Computation Element communications Protocol (PCEP) for
> communications
> > >    between a Path Computation Client (PCC) and a Path Computation
> > >    Element (PCE), or between two PCEs.  The data model includes
> > >    configuration data and state data (status information and
> counters
> > >    for the collection of statistics).
> > >
> > >
> > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-yang/
> > >
> > > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-yang-09
> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-yang-09
> > >
> > > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-pcep-yang-09
> > >
> > >
> > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> > > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at
> > > tools.ietf.org.
> > >
> > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> > >
> 
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