Re: [PCN] Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review ofdraft-ietf-pcn-baseline-encoding-05
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Hi Ruediger, taking Bob's proposal, I am almost happy. I have a slight improvement based on Bob's proposal. Pre-congestion notification (PCN) is a scheme for metering and marking packets within a DiffServ domain and for transporting packet markings to egress nodes. This PCN information can be used by feedback-based admission control and flow termination to protect the qualtiy of service of prioritized, inelastic, realtime flows. Regards, Michael Ruediger.Geib@telekom.de schrieb: > Bob, Toby, Michael > > Bob's proposal below is allright to me. My only intention is, to explain PCN to the > casual reader in the first sentence. That also works well the way Bob phrased. > > Michael, does Bobs suggestion address your concerns? > > Toby, would decomposing the unwieldy long second sentence be an option? > An example: > > It does so by measuring pre-congestion information at the boundaries > of the domain. This information is used to determine whether to admit > new flows or (in abnormal circumstances) terminate some existing flows. > Thereby the QoS of previously admitted flows is protected. > > I think, at least ending the first statement after "the boundaries of > the domain" is acceptable. But I'm not a native speaker, of course. > > Regards, > > Ruediger > > > -----Original Message----- > From: Bob Briscoe [mailto:bob@homefarmparham.co.uk] > Sent: Wednesday, August 26, 2009 5:50 PM > To: menth@informatik.uni-wuerzburg.de; Geib, Rüdiger > Cc: toby.moncaster@bt.com; pcn@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [PCN] Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review ofdraft-ietf-pcn-baseline-encoding-05 > > Michael, > > I agree that we should use the term PCN to mean > the notification part, not the whole traffic > control system built around it. We had this > discussion when publishing the architecture. > > * CORRECT: what Phil did in the Intro to the architecture. > "The objective of Pre-Congestion Notification (PCN) is to protect the > quality of service (QoS) of inelastic flows within a Diffserv domain > in a simple, scalable, and robust fashion. > " > (paraphrasing: the *objective* of notification is to protect QoS) > > * INCORRECT: The first sentence of Toby's abstract says: > "Pre-Congestion Notification (PCN) is a metering and marking scheme that > protects the quality of service (QoS) of > inelastic flows within a Diffserv > domain." > (paraphrasing: notification *is* a scheme that protects QoS) > > Suggestion to fix the first > sentence:"Pre-Congestion Notification (PCN) is a > scheme for metering and marking packets that > can be used to protect the quality of service > (QoS) of inelastic flows within a Diffserv domain." > > > > Bob > > At 16:12 26/08/2009, Michael Menth wrote: > >> Hi Ruediger, Toby, >> >> Ruediger.Geib@telekom.de schrieb: >> >>> Toby, >>> >>> you simply ommited some "PCN" in your new >>> version. I think the problem addressed by >>> Spencer may be that you try to sum up RFC5559 rather then refer to it. >>> Below there's an abstract proposal, structured top-down: >>> - What's PCN: a copy of the abstract of RFC5559. >>> - What's the functionality relevant for this document: marking >>> - What's specified by this document: baseline encoding >>> My try: >>> >>> PCN specifies flow admission and termination >>> based on pre-congestion information in order to >>> protect the quality of service of established, >>> inelastic flows within a single Diffserv domain. >>> >> What is PCN? Or is admission control and flow >> termination also part of PCN? My take on this is >> that PCN is only the marking scheme and the way >> the information is carried to egress nodes. AC >> and FT is just built on top of PCN. And to >> support QoS is the objective of AC and FT, not >> primarily or only indirectly the objective of the marking scheme. >> >> Regards, >> >> Michael >> >> >>> As a part of this specification, the overall >>> rate of the PCN coloured traffic is metered on >>> every link in the domain, and these packets are >>> appropriately marked when certain configured rates are exceeded. >>> This document specifies how such marks are >>> encoded into the IP header by re-using the >>> Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) >>> codepoints within this controlled domain. The >>> baseline encoding described here provides for >>> only two PCN encoding states, Not-marked and PCN-marked. >>> >>> >>> >>> Please maintain the notion of "overall rate of >>> PCN traffic" or "PCN coloured traffic" which is >>> being metered in the version of abstract you go on with. >>> >>> Regards, >>> >>> Ruediger >>> >>> >>> >>> -----Original Message----- >>> From: toby.moncaster@bt.com >>> [mailto:toby.moncaster@bt.com] Sent: Wednesday, August 26, 2009 1:13 PM >>> To: menth@informatik.uni-wuerzburg.de; Geib, Rüdiger >>> Cc: bob@homefarmparham.co.uk; pcn@ietf.org >>> Subject: RE: [PCN] Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART >>> Review ofdraft-ietf-pcn-baseline-encoding-05 >>> >>> So would the following sound better? : >>> >>> Pre-Congestion Notification (PCN) is a >>> metering and marking scheme that protects >>> the quality of service (QoS) of inelastic >>> flows within a Diffserv domain. The overall >>> rate of the traffic is metered on >>> every link in the domain, and packets are appropriately marked when certain >>> configured rates are exceeded. Boundary nodes can measure the level >>> of marking and thus make decisions about whether to admit or block a >>> new flow request, and (in abnormal circumstances) whether to >>> terminate some of the existing flows, thereby protecting the QoS of >>> previously admitted flows. This document specifies how such marks >>> are encoded into the IP header by re-using the Explicit Congestion >>> Notification (ECN) codepoints within this controlled domain. The >>> baseline encoding described here provides for only two PCN encoding >>> states, Not-marked and PCN-marked. >>> >>> Just for clarity here was the earlier version I proposed: >>> >>> The objective of Pre-Congestion Notification (PCN) is to protect the >>> quality of service (QoS) of inelastic flows within a Diffserv domain. >>> The overall rate of the traffic is metered on every link in the >>> domain, and packets are appropriately marked when certain >>> configured rates are exceeded. Boundary nodes can measure the level >>> of marking and thus make decisions about whether to admit or block a >>> new flow request, and (in abnormal circumstances) whether to >>> terminate some of the existing flows, thereby protecting the QoS of >>> previously admitted flows. This document specifies how such marks >>> are encoded into the IP header by re-using the Explicit Congestion >>> Notification (ECN) codepoints within this controlled domain. The >>> baseline encoding described here provides for only two PCN encoding >>> states, Not-marked and PCN-marked. >>> >>> I personally disagree with Tom's suggestion to >>> add PCN to all the defined terms (e.g. PCN >>> flow, PCN traffic) - that is fine within the >>> body of the document but in this abstract we >>> should avoid using any terms that readers >>> won't be already familiar with. >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>>> -----Original Message----- >>>> From: Michael Menth [mailto:menth@informatik.uni-wuerzburg.de] >>>> Sent: 26 August 2009 08:46 >>>> To: Ruediger.Geib@telekom.de >>>> Cc: bob@homefarmparham.co.uk; Moncaster,T,Toby,DER3 R; pcn@ietf.org >>>> Subject: Re: [PCN] Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review ofdraft-ietf-pcn- >>>> baseline-encoding-05 >>>> >>>> Hi all, >>>> >>>> Rüdiger touches an issue that I also feel is not optimally solved in >>>> the >>>> current abstract. The objective of PCN is provide marking information >>>> to >>>> egress node and the objective of admission control and flow termination >>>> is to protect QoS. I use the following short explanation for PCN. Maybe >>>> this idea could be added to the current abstract. >>>> >>>> Pre-congestion notification (PCN) is a metering and marking scheme for >>>> Differentiated Services (DiffServ) IP networks which provides egress >>>> nodes with information about load conditions inside the network >>>> \cite{RFC5559}. This information is used for admission control and flow >>>> termination to support quality of service (QoS) for admitted inelastic >>>> realtime flows that are carried with prioritization within the DiffServ >>>> domain. >>>> This document specifies how nodes encode the marking information in the >>>> IP header by re-using the Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) >>>> codepoints within a controlled DiffServ domain. The baseline encoding >>>> described here provides for only two PCN encoding states which are >>>> not-marked and PCN-marked. >>>> >>>> Regards, >>>> >>>> Michael >>>> >>>> Ruediger.Geib@telekom.de schrieb: >>>> >>>> >>>>> Toby, Bob >>>>> >>>>> if the abstract is to mention PCN functionalities not defined within >>>>> this document in a rather simplified way, would the purpose of PCN >>>>> be to enable a Diffserv domain to support measurement based >>>>> admission control as defined by PCN architecture? >>>>> >>>>> Regards, >>>>> >>>>> Ruediger >>>>> >>>>> -----Original Message----- >>>>> From: pcn-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:pcn-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of >>>>> >>>>> >>>> Bob Briscoe >>>> >>>> >>>>> Sent: Tuesday, August 25, 2009 8:42 PM >>>>> To: toby.moncaster@bt.com; pcn@ietf.org >>>>> Subject: Re: [PCN] Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review ofdraft-ietf-pcn- >>>>> >>>>> >>>> baseline-encoding-05 >>>> >>>> >>>>> Toby, >>>>> >>>>> I think this isn't just good for a casual reader, but it is actually >>>>> still correct and doesn't require defining PC-domain (which is just >>>>> the Diffserv domain once the described measures - the PDB - have been >>>>> put in place). >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Bob >>>>> >>>>> At 15:53 25/08/2009, toby.moncaster@bt.com wrote: >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> This potentially raises an issue for all future PCN documents since >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> the >>>> >>>> >>>>>> abstract was based on our agreed standard elevator-pitch >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> introduction to >>>> >>>> >>>>>> PCN... Specifically Spencer raises the question of using the defined >>>>>> term PCN-domain in the abstract. Any thoughts from anyone as to >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> whether >>>> >>>> >>>>>> this is confusing? Would it be clearer to just use "domain" (e.g. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> drop >>>> >>>> >>>>>> the "PCN-"). In which case should I alter the whole abstract as >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> follows >>>> >>>> >>>>>> (note: I realise this is strictly incorrect as it now doesn't seek >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> to >>>> >>>> >>>>>> distinguish the non-PCN and PCN traffic from each other but is this >>>>>> clearer for a casual reader?): >>>>>> >>>>>> The objective of Pre-Congestion Notification (PCN) is to protect >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> the >>>> >>>> >>>>>> quality of service (QoS) of inelastic flows within a Diffserv >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> domain. >>>> >>>> >>>>>> The overall rate of the traffic is metered on every link in the >>>>>> domain, and packets are appropriately marked when certain >>>>>> configured rates are exceeded. Boundary nodes can measure the >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> level >>>> >>>> >>>>>> of marking and thus make decisions about whether to admit or >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> block a >>>> >>>> >>>>>> new flow request, and (in abnormal circumstances) whether to >>>>>> terminate some of the existing flows, thereby protecting the QoS >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> of >>>> >>>> >>>>>> previously admitted flows. This document specifies how such >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> marks >>>> >>>> >>>>>> are encoded into the IP header by re-using the Explicit >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> Congestion >>>> >>>> >>>>>> Notification (ECN) codepoints within this controlled domain. The >>>>>> baseline encoding described here provides for only two PCN >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> encoding >>>> >>>> >>>>>> states, Not-marked and PCN-marked. >>>>>> >>>>>> Toby >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> -----Original Message----- >>>>>>> From: pcn-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:pcn-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>> Of >>>> >>>> >>>>>>> Lars Eggert >>>>>>> Sent: 25 August 2009 15:12 >>>>>>> To: pcn@ietf.org >>>>>>> Subject: [PCN] Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>> ofdraft-ietf-pcn-baseline- >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> encoding-05 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Begin forwarded message: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> From: Spencer Dawkins <spencer@wonderhamster.org> >>>>>>>> Date: August 25, 2009 14:47:49 GMT+02:00 >>>>>>>> To: "draft-ietf-pcn-baseline-encoding@tools.ietf.org" >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>> <draft-ietf- >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> pcn-baseline-encoding@tools.ietf.org >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> "ietf@ietf.org >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> " <ietf@ietf.org> >>>>>>>> Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-pcn-baseline- >>>>>>>> encoding-05 >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) >>>>>>>> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see >>>>>>>> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before >>>>>>>> posting a new version of the draft. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Document: draft-ietf-pcn-baseline-encoding-05 >>>>>>>> Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins >>>>>>>> IETF LC End Date: 2009-09-03 >>>>>>>> Review Date: 2009-08-21 >>>>>>>> IESG Telechat date: (not known) >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Summary: this specification is almost ready for publication as a >>>>>>>> Proposed Standard. I have one minor question below (flagged as >>>>>>>> "Spencer (minor)"), along with some editorial suggestions to be >>>>>>>> considered when this document is edited (either in the working >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> group >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> or by the RFC Editor). >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Abstract >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> The objective of Pre-Congestion Notification (PCN) is to protect >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> the >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> quality of service (QoS) of inelastic flows within a Diffserv >>>>>>>> domain. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Spencer (clarity): I'm not sure what the relationship between a >>>>>>>> Diffserv domain and a PCN-domain is - this couuld be clearer, >>>>>>>> especially in an Abstract. I note that RFC 5559 doesn't use the >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> term >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> PCN-domain in its Abstract ... I can guess, but I'm just guessing. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> The overall rate of the PCN-traffic is metered on every link in >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>> the >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>>> PCN-domain, and PCN-packets are appropriately marked when >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> certain >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> configured rates are exceeded. The level of marking allows the >>>>>>>> boundary nodes to make decisions about whether to admit or block >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> a >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> new flow request, and (in abnormal circumstances) whether to >>>>>>>> terminate some of the existing flows, thereby protecting the QoS >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>> of >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>>> previously admitted flows. This document specifies how such >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> marks >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> are to be encoded into the IP header by re-using the Explicit >>>>>>>> Congestion Notification (ECN) codepoints within this controlled >>>>>>>> domain. The baseline encoding described here provides for only >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>> two >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>>> PCN encoding states, Not-marked and PCN-marked. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> 4. Encoding two PCN States in IP >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> The following rules apply to all PCN traffic: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> o PCN-traffic MUST be marked with a PCN-compatible Diffserv >>>>>>>> Codepoint. To conserve DSCPs, Diffserv Codepoints SHOULD be >>>>>>>> chosen that are already defined for use with admission >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> controlled >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> traffic. Appendix A.1 gives guidance to implementiors on >>>>>>>> suitable >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Spencer (clarity): s/implementiors/implementers/? >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> DSCPs. Guidelines for mixing traffic-types within a PCN- >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> domain >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> are given in [I-D.ietf-pcn-marking-behaviour]. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> o Any packet that is not-PCN but which shares the same Diffserv >>>>>>>> codepoint as PCN-enabled traffic MUST have the ECN field of >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> its >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> outermost IP header equal to 00. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Spencer (minor): this is the only point in the specification (that >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> I >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> can >>>>>>>> find) that makes reference to the "outermost IP header". I'm not >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>> sure >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>>> whether to suggest s/outermost// here or to ask that a statement >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> be >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> added earlier in the document to clearly state that PCN encoding >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>> only >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>>> protects inelastic traffic when it's used for the outermost IP >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> header, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> but the current text seems to call attention to this in a way that >>>>>>>> makes the reader wonder what is special about THIS requirement >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> that >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> isn't true of the other requirements listed. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> 4.3. PCN-Compatible Diffserv Codepoints >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Enabling PCN marking behaviour for a specific DSCP disables any >>>>>>>> other >>>>>>>> marking behaviour (e.g. enabling PCN disables the default ECN >>>>>>>> marking >>>>>>>> behaviour introduced in [RFC3168]). All traffic metering and >>>>>>>> marking >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Spencer (clarity): here, and in Section 6, the text uses >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> "disables" >>>> >>>> >>>>>>> to >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> describe the relationship between PCN and ECN. If I understand the >>>>>>>> point, the domain is substituting one behavior for another. I >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> might >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> suggest "replaces" to describe the relationship in both locations. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> behaviours are discussed in [I-D.ietf-pcn-marking-behaviour]. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>> This >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>>> ensures compliance with the BCP guidance set out in [RFC4774]. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> 4.3.1. Co-existence of PCN and not-PCN traffic >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> The scarcity of pool 1 DSCPs coupled with the fact that PCN is >>>>>>>> envisaged as a marking behaviour that could be applied to a >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> number >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> of >>>>>>>> different DSCPs makes it essential that we provide a not-PCN >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>> state. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>>> As stated above (and expanded in Appendix A.1) the aim is for >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> PCN >>>> >>>> >>>>>>> to >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> re-use existing DSCPs. Because PCN re-defines the meaning of >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> the >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> ECN >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Spencer (clarity): here, the text uses "re-defines", which I like >>>>>>>> better than "disables", but if you go for "replaces" previously >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> and >>>> >>>> >>>>>>> in >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> section 6, you might want to use the same wording here. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> field for such DSCPs it is important to allow an operator to >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> still >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> use the DSCP for traffic that isn't PCN-enabled. This is >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> achieved >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> by >>>>>>>> providing a not-PCN state within the encoding scheme. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> A.1. Choice of Suitable DSCPs >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> The PCN Working Group chose not to define a single DSCP for use >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> with >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> PCN for several reasons. Firstly the PCN mechanism is >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> applicable >>>> >>>> >>>>>>> to >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> a variety of different traffic classes. Secondly standards >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> track >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> DSCPs are in increasingly short supply. Thirdly PCN should be >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>> seen >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>>> as being essentially a marking behaviour similar to ECN but >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> intended >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> for inelastic traffic. The choice of which DSCP is most >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> suitable >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> for >>>>>>>> a given PCN-domain is dependent on the nature of the traffic >>>>>>>> entering >>>>>>>> that domain and the link rates of all the links making up that >>>>>>>> domain. In PCN-domains with uniformly high link rates, the >>>>>>>> appropriate DSCPs would currently be those for the Real Time >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> Traffic >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Class [RFC5127]. To be clear the PCN Working Group recommends >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> using >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Spencer (clarity): is this 2119 language (apparently not, since >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>> this >>>> >>>> >>>>>>>> section is not normative), or are you saying "suggests"? My >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> suggestion >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> is that we not use 2119 language, even lowercased, except for >>>>>>>> normative text - this seems to cause confusion from time to time. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>> But >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>>> please check with your shepherding AD to see if he agrees. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> admission control for the following service classes: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> o Telephony (EF) >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> o Real-time interactive (CS4) >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> o Broadcast Video (CS3) >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> o Multimedia Conferencing (AF4) >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>>>> Gen-art mailing list >>>>>>>> Gen-art@ietf.org >>>>>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>> PCN mailing list >>>>>> PCN@ietf.org >>>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pcn >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>> PCN mailing list >>>>> PCN@ietf.org >>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pcn >>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>> PCN mailing list >>>>> PCN@ietf.org >>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pcn >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>> -- >>>> Dr. Michael Menth, Assistant Professor >>>> University of Wuerzburg, Institute of Computer Science >>>> Am Hubland, D-97074 Wuerzburg, Germany, room B206 >>>> phone: (+49)-931/31-86644 (new), fax: (+49)-931/888-6632 >>>> mailto:menth@informatik.uni-wuerzburg.de >>>> http://www3.informatik.uni-wuerzburg.de/research/ngn >>>> >>>> >> -- >> Dr. Michael Menth, Assistant Professor >> University of Wuerzburg, Institute of Computer Science >> Am Hubland, D-97074 Wuerzburg, Germany, room B206 >> phone: (+49)-931/31-86644 (new), fax: (+49)-931/888-6632 >> mailto:menth@informatik.uni-wuerzburg.de >> http://www3.informatik.uni-wuerzburg.de/research/ngn >> -- Dr. Michael Menth, Assistant Professor University of Wuerzburg, Institute of Computer Science Am Hubland, D-97074 Wuerzburg, Germany, room B206 phone: (+49)-931/31-86644 (new), fax: (+49)-931/888-6632 mailto:menth@informatik.uni-wuerzburg.de http://www3.informatik.uni-wuerzburg.de/research/ngn
- [PCN] Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf… Lars Eggert
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- Re: [PCN] Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review ofdraft-i… Tom Taylor
- Re: [PCN] Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review ofdraft-i… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [PCN] Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review ofdraft-i… Ruediger.Geib
- Re: [PCN] Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review ofdraft-i… Michael Menth
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