Re: [pim] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-16: (with COMMENT)

Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com> Fri, 10 July 2020 09:54 UTC

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From: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>
To: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [pim] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-16: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Murray,

Please check inline, thanks.

…

Section 6:

* I suggest this be split into two subsections, which in my experience is more conventional (but not required).
[Authors]:  We are trying to follow the convention and template suggested by RFC 8407, Sec 3.8, and Sec 5.  The single section has been used by existing RFCs like RFC 8022. Do you think that we should use a different style?"


BR/Hongji

From: Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>
Sent: Wednesday, July 8, 2020 11:24 PM
To: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>
Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>rg>; draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang@ietf.org; pim-chairs@ietf.org; pim@ietf.org; Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>om>; aretana.ietf@gmail.com
Subject: Re: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-16: (with COMMENT)

On Wed, Jul 8, 2020 at 4:57 AM Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com<mailto:hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>> wrote:
The issues founded in early YANG doctor review have been addressed. YANG doctor also confirmed it in the second round review on version 12 almost a month ago.
Regarding other comments,  we will post a new version ASAP to address them.

Whew!  Thanks for the follow-up. It would be a good idea to update the Shepherd Writeup in the future, because that's one of our evaluation resources once it gets to the IESG.

-MSK