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Re: [pim] pim wglc for 3228bis, 3376bis and 3810bis

"Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang" <zzhang@juniper.net> Fri, 08 December 2023 19:13 UTC

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From: "Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang" <zzhang@juniper.net>
To: Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>, "pim@ietf.org" <pim@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [pim] pim wglc for 3228bis, 3376bis and 3810bis
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Subject: Re: [pim] pim wglc for 3228bis, 3376bis and 3810bis
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Hi,

One editorial nit. It would be nice not to change to the following table format (as one example)

   An implementation of IGMPv3 MUST also support the following three
   message types, for interoperation with previous versions of IGMP (see
   Section 7):

      +===================+=============================+===========+
      | Type Number (hex) |         Message Name        | Reference |
      +===================+=============================+===========+
      |        0x12       | Version 1 Membership Report | [RFC1112] |
      +-------------------+-----------------------------+-----------+
      |        0x16       | Version 2 Membership Report | [RFC2236] |
      +-------------------+-----------------------------+-----------+
      |        0x17       |    Version 2 Leave Group    | [RFC2236] |
      +-------------------+-----------------------------+-----------+

It makes text-based editing slightly harder and gives noise when one uses the iddiff tool to compare against the original RFC.
Just a personal preference 😊

Although I did not get to verify the technical details, I trust the author's work and support the advancement of these documents.

Thanks.
Jeffrey


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Subject: [pim] pim wglc for 3228bis, 3376bis and 3810bis

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Dear working group

We have been working on progressing these core documents to Internet Standard.

The documents are

IANA Considerations for Internet Group Management Protocols https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-3228bis/__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!FD3Za78albR3t1oxIwbsTaKCPwsq4F3YEPNC4Xlu8JogXSjVIXnhrQZl1YKE-P9rE1xX4AHU_Fh4$

Internet Group Management Protocol, Version 3 https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-3376bis/__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!FD3Za78albR3t1oxIwbsTaKCPwsq4F3YEPNC4Xlu8JogXSjVIXnhrQZl1YKE-P9rE1xX4HT8Qtg6$

Multicast Listener Discovery Version 2 (MLDv2) for IPv6 https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-3810bis/__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!FD3Za78albR3t1oxIwbsTaKCPwsq4F3YEPNC4Xlu8JogXSjVIXnhrQZl1YKE-P9rE1xX4CNmGFB6$

As these are important documents, I am hoping we will get some people to review these drafts and give us feedback. We did not get any responses to the previous wglc for these documents.

Please respond by December 15th 2023 whether you believe these documents are ready for publication, and any comments or concerns you may have. Any input is helpful.

Regards,
Stig

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