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Re: [ppsp] WGLC for draft-ietf-ppsp-survey-02 until Dec 5th

"Yingjie Gu(yingjie)" <guyingjie@huawei.com> Wed, 28 December 2011 02:12 UTC

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Thank you for reviewing and for the comments.

I will update the corresponding part of the draft. 

 

Hope to hear more comments from the WG. Thank you very much.

 

*Seems that we have made most the people who are interested in PPSP Survey
became the co-authors of the draft. The result is that we have a long author
list, but few reviewers. : ( *

 

 

 

  _____  

Best Regards
Gu Yingjie

 

发件人: ppsp-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:ppsp-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 Rui Cruz
发送时间: 2011年12月4日 乐乐3:08
收件人: ppsp
抄送: Rui Cruz
主题: Re: [ppsp] WGLC for draft-ietf-ppsp-survey-02 until Dec 5th

 

Hi,

 

Reading again the draft I noticed the following:

 

In the Introduction section, the sentence "the studied P2P streaming
systems...." just mentions PPLive, Joost and Octoshape", however the
document considers several other systems organized by their topology
(mesh-based, tree-based and hybrid). IMHO that sentence should mention the
topologies and list the systems surveyed.

 

There is a typo in last sentence of page 20: "In stead ..." should be
"Instead ...."

 

In page 25, section 3.3.1, 2nd sentence of 1st paragraph, seems out of place
as it refers to "As in the above analysis, " and there seems to be no
related analysis above. A suggestion would be to continue first sentence
like "... live streaming, but had poor delay ...".

 

In page 26 first paragraph there is no description of the acronym BM, and
the last sentence does really need to be in parenthesis?

 

Regards,

Rui Cruz

 

On 21/11/2011, at 15:35, Martin Stiemerling wrote:





Dear all,

This is the Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for "Survey of P2P Streaming
Applications" (draft-ietf-ppsp-survey-02,
http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-ppsp-survey-02.txt). 

Please review the draft and send your comments to the PPSP list. Any type of
review is appreciated, even it is saying only "I have read the draft and it
is ok". 
However, a thorough review is required by a number of PPSP WG members (which
is YOU!)

The WGLC starts right now and will end December 5th, 6pm PT.  

 Martin

martin.stiemerling@neclab.eu

NEC Laboratories Europe - Network Research Division NEC Europe Limited |
Registered Office: NEC House, 1 Victoria Road, London W3 6BL | Registered in
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