Re: [ppsp] WGLC for draft-ietf-ppsp-survey-02 until Dec 5th

Hi,

Reading again the draft I noticed the following:

In the Introduction section, the sentence "the studied P2P streaming systems...." just mentions PPLive, Joost and Octoshape", however the document considers several other systems organized by their topology (mesh-based, tree-based and hybrid). IMHO that sentence should mention the topologies and list the systems surveyed.

There is a typo in last sentence of page 20: "In stead ..." should be "Instead ...."

In page 25, section 3.3.1, 2nd sentence of 1st paragraph, seems out of place as it refers to "As in the above analysis, " and there seems to be no related analysis above. A suggestion would be to continue first sentence like "... live streaming, but had poor delay ...".

In page 26 first paragraph there is no description of the acronym BM, and the last sentence does really need to be in parenthesis?

Regards,
Rui Cruz

On 21/11/2011, at 15:35, Martin Stiemerling wrote:

> Dear all,
> 
> This is the Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for "Survey of P2P Streaming Applications" (draft-ietf-ppsp-survey-02, http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-ppsp-survey-02.txt). 
> 
> Please review the draft and send your comments to the PPSP list. Any type of review is appreciated, even it is saying only "I have read the draft and it is ok". 
> However, a thorough review is required by a number of PPSP WG members (which is YOU!)
> 
> The WGLC starts right now and will end December 5th, 6pm PT.  
> 
>  Martin
> 
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Regards,

Rui Cruz
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IST/INESC-ID/INOV - Lisbon, Portugal
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