Re: [precis] WGLC: draft-ietf-precis-framework-09.txt

[Peter Saint-Andre <[e-mail]>]

On 10/9/13 7:20 PM, "Martin J. Dürst" wrote:
> On 2013/10/09 21:34, Peter Saint-Andre wrote:
>> On 10/9/13 3:12 AM, "Martin J. Dürst" wrote:
> 
>>> In addition, in the introduction, there is a paragraph:
>>>
>>>     5.  Leave various mapping operations (e.g., case preservation or
>>>         lowercasing, Unicode normalization, mapping of certain
>>> characters
>>>         to other characters or to nothing, handling of full-width and
>>>         half-width characters, handling of right-to-left characters) as
>>>         the responsibility of application protocols, as was done for
>>>         IDNA2008 through an IDNA-specific mapping document [RFC5895].
>>>
>>> where "handling of right-to-left characters" is described as a mapping
>>> operation. That doesn't make sense to me, I think it should be moved out
>>> to a separate point.
>>
>>
>> I think we can change "mapping operations" to "character-related
>> operations".
> 
> Well, that wouldn't be wrong, but it would be extremely generic. There's
> nothing in the document that isn't about characters, or is there?
> 
> I think something like
> 
> 5.  Leave various mapping operations (e.g., case preservation or
>     lowercasing, Unicode normalization, mapping of certain characters
>     to other characters or to nothing, handling of full-width and
>     half-width characters) and the handling of right-to-left characters
>     as the responsibility of application protocols, as was done for
>     IDNA2008 through an IDNA-specific mapping document [RFC5895].
> 
> Would be at least slightly better.

Sure, that works for me.

Peter

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