[proto-team] Re: small issues with draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding-07

[Lars Eggert <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

I just realized that there is another inconsistency in -07: The title  
is "Document Shepherding from Working Group Last Call to IESG  
Approval", but we have some text in there that says:

    A Document Shepherd's responsibilities include: [...]

    o  Following up on IANA and RFC Editor requests in the post-approval
       shepherding of the document.

and further down:

    Consequently, the document shepherding process includes follow-up
    work during all document-processing stages after Working Group Last
    Call, i.e., during AD Evaluation of a document, during IESG
    evaluation, and during post-approval processing by IANA and the RFC
    Editor.

Since the rest of the text doesn't talk about how to deal with the  
IANA and the RFC Editor, I propose to remove the bullet and change  
the other paragraph to:

    Consequently, the document shepherding process includes follow-up
    work during all document-processing stages after Working Group Last
    Call until IESG approval of the document.

Comments?

Thanks,
Lars
-- 
Lars Eggert                                     NEC Network Laboratories

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