[PWE3] Comments on draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-transport-03.txt
"BOCCI Matthew" <Matthew.Bocci@alcatel-lucent.com> Wed, 17 June 2009 14:26 UTC
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From: BOCCI Matthew <Matthew.Bocci@alcatel-lucent.com>
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Authors, In reviewing the draft while preparing the proto statement, I have noted a few comments (mostly derived from ID NITS), as follows: - The draft is informational, but contains RFC2119 like language e.g. capitalised SHOULD. Please check though the draft and revise accordingly. - The reference to the mpls-tp requirements draft is out of date, - The reference to draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-bfd is missing (line 214) - Line 204 shows a 'TBD' for the VCCV channel type for VCCV-BFD. Please update this. - ali-mpls-rsvp-te-no-php-oob-mapping is cited as a normative reference, but this expired a while ago. - Please check the boiler plate as to whether you need to add a pre-RFC5378 disclaimer Best regards Matthew
- [PWE3] Comments on draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-transport… BOCCI Matthew
- Re: [PWE3] Comments on draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-trans… Stewart Bryant
- Re: [PWE3] Comments on draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-trans… Ross Callon
- Re: [PWE3] Comments on draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-trans… BOCCI Matthew