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Re: [PWE3] Comments on draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-transport-03.txt

Stewart Bryant <stbryant@cisco.com> Wed, 17 June 2009 15:03 UTC

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Subject: Re: [PWE3] Comments on draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-transport-03.txt
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BOCCI Matthew wrote:
>
> Authors,
>
> In reviewing the draft while preparing the proto statement, I have 
> noted a few comments (mostly derived from ID NITS), as follows:
>
> - The draft is informational, but contains RFC2119 like language e.g. 
> capitalised SHOULD. Please check though the draft and revise accordingly.
>
> - The reference to the mpls-tp requirements draft is out of date,
>
> - The reference to draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-bfd is missing (line 214)
>
> - Line 204 shows a ‘TBD’ for the VCCV channel type for VCCV-BFD. 
> Please update this.
>
> - ali-mpls-rsvp-te-no-php-oob-mapping is cited as a normative 
> reference, but this expired a while ago.
>
> - Please check the boiler plate as to whether you need to add a 
> pre-RFC5378 disclaimer
>
> Best regards
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> Matthew
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Will deal with by the end of the week

Stewart

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