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Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Repeat tokens in all Initial packets (#2089)

ianswett <notifications@github.com> Tue, 04 December 2018 15:41 UTC

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ianswett commented on this pull request.



> @@ -1548,9 +1548,9 @@ frame (see {{validate-future}}).
 
 Upon receiving the client's Initial packet, the server can request address
 validation by sending a Retry packet ({{packet-retry}}) containing a token. This
-token MUST be repeated by the client in all Initial packets it sends after it receives the
-Retry packet.  In response to receiving a token in an Initial packet, a server
-can either abort the connection or permit it to proceed.
+token MUST be repeated by the client in all Initial packets it sends after it
+receives the Retry packet.  In response to receiving a token in an Initial
+packet, a server can either abort the connection or permit it to proceed.
 

SG, changed from receiving to processing, because otherwise I think this sentence is not really correct.

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