Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Make the ack-tracking examplary (#3979)

ianswett <notifications@github.com> Mon, 03 August 2020 14:15 UTC

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@ianswett commented on this pull request.



>  ack-eliciting packet has been received to include an ACK frame with outgoing
 frames.

This is pre-existing, but this sentence is weird, particularly in the context of the "An endpoint MUST NOT send a non-ack-eliciting packet in response to a non-ack-eliciting packet..." above.

Is this supposed to be ", and endpoint waits until..." without the MAY?

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