IETF Logo Mail Archive

AD review: draft-ietf-quic-datagram-06

Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com> Mon, 06 December 2021 13:53 UTC

Return-Path: <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>
X-Original-To: quic@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: quic@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id F0D8B3A03ED; Mon, 6 Dec 2021 05:53:24 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.801
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.801 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIMWL_WL_HIGH=-0.701, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H2=-0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=ericsson.com
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id rLY9h04EQflG; Mon, 6 Dec 2021 05:53:20 -0800 (PST)
Received: from EUR01-HE1-obe.outbound.protection.outlook.com (mail-eopbgr130041.outbound.protection.outlook.com [40.107.13.41]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 430F93A0412; Mon, 6 Dec 2021 05:53:16 -0800 (PST)
ARC-Seal: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; s=arcselector9901; d=microsoft.com; cv=none; b=nQDhfVRkCfrEover6BkU5+xrqZsK9gfw4zWdBwq/Zf0mgdrxWDfs+bXq8PbRmonOo4Cq/9QaHOlMwqu+C4ExDNYvzxCb8NH+KIiw+ZrpI7iaaqbUrq7CsdWmnFa1CTwp51q9Yk6ElOc3F5147+mbaaD+ZGfMt/YHk3qIciVgZppqT3stT+mj4RElF9LrQUFhEpa4cKQQ5MEl5aYtaRj/9TJx795T4PdbeeX0ZHk1Aj1+oBA8WBcIsvWqfJRcmzoUAlOl3rQklBdVcUz2LhjCLGiYqYQbRzIfe5jRXcKseDqH5hGvQAtv4DJ4nT1rarKYSL20n3MQsh0JvPUVW9MQWg==
ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=microsoft.com; s=arcselector9901; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-ChunkCount:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-0:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-1; bh=CVBxCAquyMT/W7Pz9goMQz0oKN7CxI6WlXeMCUcLbNU=; b=aSdSCsE73YWWSDDkrw5a5nx//qEAtyKgpUPOiZ1Jmq2jnzMIPiTSfJwy48iRja823yCWSgdHaaRCn4cxyQvTAxqf/qxj7GYeFfFfkK+4Dz1u9DK+lJIj7Qg0v9a/YgBA86aCKIqGmlSHk+QwgqWzs+rwrfwTZSGlGQGQeKg/+C1ntzUhmaM9ZY/AXjKxFwZR3s6ILxrs1IYUXHokzFLvPnOzrWa7fFaQiKdiMJNCskZyrNiQ2ZbTeHSeqYevYOE6UFWJjwxlSFsRDhI68RmtZgBaTnAXbv243E3Lu6lU2J//y7ymqcUMeXnXCKCp0ko0uF9PTxlOS3uTwhd5jhtxdQ==
ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx.microsoft.com 1; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=ericsson.com; dmarc=pass action=none header.from=ericsson.com; dkim=pass header.d=ericsson.com; arc=none
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=ericsson.com; s=selector1; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version:X-MS-Exchange-SenderADCheck; bh=CVBxCAquyMT/W7Pz9goMQz0oKN7CxI6WlXeMCUcLbNU=; b=ms34w7YclThiENZu/Tq+19R0pZgMdz8ooKpWvB2OVfFkvBc+wQe6FzcYeQcnrHbEB4Rn5OpeHNaQHpYQO7YkxR33lnCdTjKpjekIdaBU7HaEkzcSUnQmAp92iNjDL+zVmuvT9ardjBpx1J6+GG/1nbZYzO/PZmJ2urFgI1bu538=
Received: from HE1PR07MB4187.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com (2603:10a6:7:98::23) by HE1PR07MB4316.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com (2603:10a6:7:a2::13) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.20.4755.11; Mon, 6 Dec 2021 13:53:13 +0000
Received: from HE1PR07MB4187.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::f5fc:18c1:1293:1ad8]) by HE1PR07MB4187.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::f5fc:18c1:1293:1ad8%5]) with mapi id 15.20.4755.009; Mon, 6 Dec 2021 13:53:13 +0000
From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>
To: IETF QUIC WG <quic@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-quic-datagram.authors@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-quic-datagram.authors@ietf.org>
Subject: AD review: draft-ietf-quic-datagram-06
Thread-Topic: AD review: draft-ietf-quic-datagram-06
Thread-Index: AQHX6qicniojwWAi20ezN0I3SdIItA==
Date: Mon, 06 Dec 2021 13:53:13 +0000
Message-ID: <8F8BF695-5B27-44F4-AC26-9D50BD398F79@ericsson.com>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-GB
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
user-agent: Microsoft-MacOutlook/16.55.21111400
authentication-results: dkim=none (message not signed) header.d=none;dmarc=none action=none header.from=ericsson.com;
x-ms-publictraffictype: Email
x-ms-office365-filtering-correlation-id: af0a85a4-3930-4381-2519-08d9b8bfbf4c
x-ms-traffictypediagnostic: HE1PR07MB4316:EE_
x-microsoft-antispam-prvs: <HE1PR07MB4316D175E4CE62C1953F6B5C9F6D9@HE1PR07MB4316.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com>
x-ms-oob-tlc-oobclassifiers: OLM:9508;
x-ms-exchange-senderadcheck: 1
x-ms-exchange-antispam-relay: 0
x-microsoft-antispam: BCL:0;
x-microsoft-antispam-message-info: 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
x-forefront-antispam-report: CIP:255.255.255.255; CTRY:; LANG:en; SCL:1; SRV:; IPV:NLI; SFV:NSPM; H:HE1PR07MB4187.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com; PTR:; CAT:NONE; SFS:(4636009)(366004)(33656002)(508600001)(38070700005)(26005)(2906002)(71200400001)(64756008)(66446008)(6486002)(76116006)(66946007)(110136005)(966005)(4744005)(66476007)(86362001)(66556008)(122000001)(8676002)(91956017)(316002)(6506007)(8936002)(36756003)(166002)(450100002)(38100700002)(2616005)(44832011)(5660300002)(186003)(6512007)(83380400001)(82960400001)(45980500001); DIR:OUT; SFP:1101;
x-ms-exchange-antispam-messagedata-chunkcount: 1
x-ms-exchange-antispam-messagedata-0: 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
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_8F8BF6955B2744F4AC269D50BD398F79ericssoncom_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-OriginatorOrg: ericsson.com
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthAs: Internal
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthSource: HE1PR07MB4187.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-Network-Message-Id: af0a85a4-3930-4381-2519-08d9b8bfbf4c
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-originalarrivaltime: 06 Dec 2021 13:53:13.6245 (UTC)
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-fromentityheader: Hosted
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-id: 92e84ceb-fbfd-47ab-be52-080c6b87953f
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-mailboxtype: HOSTED
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-userprincipalname: wneNzydq6S0Cb2pI9IG0pHtdQNKoDHQxyClkNw2T+PrAkq4eauXkyBFOKWuoMHOe1kC5+PZGYv4cQNUeHcm8NIdp9v34/WWhpNdlBCr9aqE9TNX1D7LqpZNZ3HzfK2+/
X-MS-Exchange-Transport-CrossTenantHeadersStamped: HE1PR07MB4316
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/quic/jTKWhHbj8QN2b2-lRlWfit7Fj8M>
X-BeenThere: quic@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: Main mailing list of the IETF QUIC working group <quic.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/quic>, <mailto:quic-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/quic/>
List-Post: <mailto:quic@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:quic-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/quic>, <mailto:quic-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 06 Dec 2021 13:53:25 -0000

Hi,

Thanks for well written and short document.

This document have following text in the abstract and introduction –

“Discussion of this work is encouraged to happen on the QUIC IETF mailing list quic@ietf.org or on the GitHub repository which contains the draft: https://github.com/quicwg/datagram.”

I don’t think we need to have them at this stage of this document. Please remove them.

I have filed number of issues/clarification requests. I would like them to be addressed before moving forward. Please find them below.


  *   https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/65#issue-1072093788
  *   https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/66#issue-1072096156
  *   https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/67#issue-1072166520
  *   https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/68#issue-1072177360

BR


Zahed

v2.23.0 | Report a Bug | By Email