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Re: [Rfced-future] Suggested text for issues #56, #57, #61, #62

Michael StJohns <msj@nthpermutation.com> Wed, 30 June 2021 16:20 UTC

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From: Michael StJohns <msj@nthpermutation.com>
To: Eliot Lear <lear@lear.ch>, Jay Daley <jay@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Rfced-future] Suggested text for issues #56, #57, #61, #62
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On 6/30/2021 12:15 PM, Michael StJohns wrote:
> On 6/30/2021 2:18 AM, Eliot Lear wrote:
>> The RSWG establishes policy, with input from the community, the RSAB, 
>> and the RSEA.
>
> s/establishes/proposes/ please.
>
Or maybe even:

The RSWG drafts policy documentation, with input from the community, the 
RSAB and the RSEA.

The RSAB considers and decides whether to approve such documentation for 
publication in the editorial series.


This makes it clear that the RSAB is not a rubber stamp for the RSWGs 
proposals.

Mike

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