Re: [Rfced-future] Suggested text for issues #56, #57, #61, #62

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Tue, 24 August 2021 12:33 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Rfced-future] Suggested text for issues #56, #57, #61, #62
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Hi,

On 2021-8-24, at 15:29, Eliot Lear <lear@lear.ch> wrote:
> I have, perhaps poorly, attempted to piece together what I think is roughly what we're all talking about.  I may have entirely gotten this wrong, and so please nitpick.  There is one sentence in brackets that I think is redundant.  I have not really touched the relationship text.
> 
> Eliot
> 
> # Roles and Processes

<snip>

this would work for me, with or without the sentence in brackets.

Thanks,
Lars