Re: [Roll] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03: (with COMMENT)

"Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com> Wed, 26 October 2016 15:25 UTC

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Roll] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03: (with COMMENT)
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Nice! I love it Spencer : )

I suggest a slight adaptation to show that with the current specs, the device is the endpoint for the tunnel and the destination of inner packet as well.


       ------+---------                           ^
             |          Internet                  |
             |                                    | Native IPv6
          +-----+                                 |
          |     | Border Router (RPL Root)      + | +
          |     |                               | | |
          +-----+                               | | | tunneled
             |                                  | | | using
       o    o   o    o                          | | | IPv6-in-
   o o   o  o   o  o  o o   o                   | | | IPv6 and
  o  o o  o o    o   o   o  o  o                | | | RPL SRH
  o   o    o  o     o  o    o  o  o             | | |
o  o   o  o   o         o   o o                | | |
o          o             o     o               + v +
                   LLN


Works ?

Pascal

From: Spencer Dawkins at IETF [mailto:spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com]
Sent: mercredi 26 octobre 2016 16:26
To: Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com>
Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; roll-chairs@ietf.org; Alvaro Retana (aretana) <aretana@cisco.com>; roll@ietf.org; draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch@ietf.org; mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca
Subject: Re: Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03: (with COMMENT)

Hi, Pascal,

Thanks for the quick response. Inline.

On Wed, Oct 26, 2016 at 4:37 AM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com<mailto:pthubert@cisco.com>> wrote:
Hello Spencer,

The 2 shorter arrows, left and right, represent the encapsulation tunnel.

Now that you've said that, I totally get it, but I didn't get that from the picture at all.

Would you have a suggestion to improve the readability?

Maybe :-)

I lengthened the native IPv6 arrow and used different endpoints for the tunnel, hyphenated "IPv6-in-IPv6, and included "tunneled using" in the label (I probably didn't use the right words, but you'd know what is correct).

       ------+---------                           ^
             |          Internet                  |
             |                                    | Native IPv6
          +-----+                                 |
          |     | Border Router (RPL Root)      + | +
          |     |                               | | |
          +-----+                               | | | tunneled
             |                                  | | | using
       o    o   o    o                          | | | IPv6-in-
   o o   o  o   o  o  o o   o                   | | | IPv6 and
  o  o o  o o    o   o   o  o  o                | | | RPL SRH
  o   o    o  o     o  o    o  o  o             | | |
 o  o   o  o   o         o   o o                + | +
 o          o             o     o                 |
                   LLN                            v

If this helps you folks, please use it (and if it doesn't, please don't!)

Thanks,

Spencer the AD, where "A" may or may not stand for "ASCII-artist" ...

Take care,

Pascal

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Subject: Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03: No Objection

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In figure 2, I'm a bit confused on what the third-from-the-left vertical line represents - is it also IPv6 in IPv6 plus RPL SRH, or something else?