Re: [Roll] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03: (with COMMENT)

Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 26 October 2016 14:25 UTC

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Date: Wed, 26 Oct 2016 09:25:32 -0500
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Subject: Re: [Roll] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03: (with COMMENT)
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Reply-To: Routing Over Low power and Lossy networks <roll@ietf.org>

Hi, Pascal,

Thanks for the quick response. Inline.

On Wed, Oct 26, 2016 at 4:37 AM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <
pthubert@cisco.com> wrote:

> Hello Spencer,
>
> The 2 shorter arrows, left and right, represent the encapsulation tunnel.
>

Now that you've said that, I totally get it, but I didn't get that from the
picture at all.


> Would you have a suggestion to improve the readability?


Maybe :-)

I lengthened the native IPv6 arrow and used different endpoints for the
tunnel, hyphenated "IPv6-in-IPv6, and included "tunneled using" in the
label (I probably didn't use the right words, but you'd know what is
correct).

       ------+---------                           ^
             |          Internet                  |
             |                                    | Native IPv6
          +-----+                                 |
          |     | Border Router (RPL Root)      + | +
          |     |                               | | |
          +-----+                               | | | tunneled
             |                                  | | | using
       o    o   o    o                          | | | IPv6-in-
   o o   o  o   o  o  o o   o                   | | | IPv6 and
  o  o o  o o    o   o   o  o  o                | | | RPL SRH
  o   o    o  o     o  o    o  o  o             | | |
 o  o   o  o   o         o   o o                + | +
 o          o             o     o                 |
                   LLN                            v

If this helps you folks, please use it (and if it doesn't, please don't!)

Thanks,

Spencer the AD, where "A" may or may not stand for "ASCII-artist" ...


> Take care,
>
> Pascal
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Spencer Dawkins [mailto:spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com]
> Sent: mercredi 26 octobre 2016 05:40
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> Cc: draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch@ietf.org; Alvaro Retana (aretana) <
> aretana@cisco.com>; Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>;
> roll-chairs@ietf.org; mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca; roll@ietf.org
> Subject: Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03:
> (with COMMENT)
>
> Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03: No Objection
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>
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> In figure 2, I'm a bit confused on what the third-from-the-left vertical
> line represents - is it also IPv6 in IPv6 plus RPL SRH, or something else?
>
>
>

[Roll] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-iet… Spencer Dawkins
Re: [Roll] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
Re: [Roll] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft… Spencer Dawkins at IETF
Re: [Roll] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
Re: [Roll] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft… Spencer Dawkins at IETF
Re: [Roll] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)