Re: [Roll] Write Up draft-ietf-roll-dao-projection-30

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 03 January 2023 17:40 UTC

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Inés:

Hi!  Happy New Year!

Just a couple of comments on the writeup:

- About the downrefs.

— rfc4655, as used, can be an Informational reference.
— rfc9030 has been used before as a downref, so there won’t be an issue
using it as Normative.
— I’m assuming the raw-architecture will be the same case.


Thanks!

Alvaro.


On December 30, 2022 at 3:04:01 PM, Ines Robles (
mariainesrobles=40googlemail.com@dmarc.ietf.org) wrote:

Please find the write up for dao projection:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-roll-dao-projection/shepherdwriteup/