Re: [rtcweb] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtcweb-sdp-05.txt

Thanks Jonathan .. Just submitted version -06 with the title change

./Suhas

On Mon, Apr 10, 2017 at 9:43 AM, Jonathan Lennox <jonathan@vidyo.com> wrote:

> I like “Annotated Example SDP for WebRTC”, since I think that’ll be the
> clearest for the intended audience, but since you're document editor I
> think this is ultimately your decision.
>
> On Apr 10, 2017, at 12:38 PM, Suhas Nandakumar <suhasietf@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> Hi Jonathan
>
>    You are right on the article part and happy to change it. I like  “Annotated
> Example SDP for WebRTC." or " “Annotated Example SDP for RtcWeb"  or
> replace WebRTC/RtcWeb with JSEP ..
>
> Let's finalize one and I can make the updates
>
> Cheers
> Suhas
>
> On Mon, Apr 10, 2017 at 9:21 AM, Jonathan Lennox <jonathan@vidyo.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Not to start a bikeshed, but the title “SDP for the WebRTC” isn’t very
>> good.
>>
>> First of all, “WebRTC” doesn’t usually take an article.
>>
>> Secondly, the title doesn’t make clear that this contains annotated
>> examples.
>>
>> I’d suggest something like “Annotated Example SDP for WebRTC.” (or
>> perhaps "for JSEP”).
>>
>> On Apr 10, 2017, at 12:25 AM, Suhas Nandakumar <suhasietf@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>> Hello All
>>
>>   I submitted version-05 that includes:
>>      - IPv6 examples
>>      - fix idnits errors
>>
>> look forward for your feedback
>>
>>
>> cheers
>> Suhas
>>
>> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>> From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
>> Date: Sun, Apr 9, 2017 at 9:22 PM
>> Subject: [rtcweb] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtcweb-sdp-05.txt
>> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
>> Cc: rtcweb@ietf.org
>>
>>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Real-Time Communication in WEB-browsers
>> of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : SDP for the WebRTC
>>         Authors         : Suhas Nandakumar
>>                           Cullen Jennings
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-rtcweb-sdp-05.txt
>>         Pages           : 107
>>         Date            : 2017-04-09
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    The Real-Time Communications in WEB-browsers (Rtcweb) working group
>>    is charged to provide protocol support for direct interactive rich
>>    communication using audio, video and data between two peers' web
>>    browsers.  With in the Rtcweb framework, Session Description protocol
>>    (SDP) is used for negotiating session capabilities between the peers.
>>    Such a negotiation happens based on the SDP Offer/Answer exchange
>>    mechanism.
>>
>>    This document provides an informational reference in describing the
>>    role of SDP and the Offer/Answer exchange mechanism for the most
>>    common Rtcweb use-cases.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtcweb-sdp/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtcweb-sdp-05
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rtcweb-sdp-05
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rtcweb-sdp-05
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
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