Re: [lamps] Preparing the shepherd write-up for rfc6844bis

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Subject: Re: [lamps] Preparing the shepherd write-up for rfc6844bis
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Jacob,

Thanks for the excellent analysis and timely analysis of 
the outstanding errata.  I agree with your analysis
except where noted inline.

> > 1. Before proceeding, please fix errata of RFC 6844.
> >     Most of them still remain.
> >
> >     See https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/rfc6844
> 
> Related to IANA Considerations section:
> 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid3547
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid3528
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid3532
> 
> Addressed:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid3532

Copy/paste error: You meant eid5097 here.

>   - We no longer treat DNAME specially.
> 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5200
>   - Parameters are now split by semicolons.
> 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5244
>   - We added explicit wording about non-empty CAA RRsets.
> 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5452
>   - We fixed the ABNF.
> 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5065
>   - This was the discovery algorithm change.
> 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5091
>   - This was obsoleted by the revised language we used for the discovery
> algorithm.
> 
> 
> Needs addressing:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid4062
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid4070

eid5090?

-Tim