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Re: [stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emergency-services-05

Chris Wendt <chris-ietf@chriswendt.net> Tue, 09 February 2021 17:40 UTC

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Subject: Re: [stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emergency-services-05
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Will do.

> On Feb 9, 2021, at 1:24 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> I think unless you've received other Last Call feedback, you can post what you have as -06 tomorrow when Last Call closes, and we can get it on the next available telechat.
> 
> -MSK
> 
> On Tue, Jan 26, 2021 at 11:51 AM Chris Wendt <chris-ietf@chriswendt.net <mailto:chris-ietf@chriswendt.net>> wrote:
> Hi Murray,
> 
> Thanks for the review, i have updated my local document with fixes for your comments, will wait to release a 06 in case any other last comments come in.
> 
> -Chris
> 
> > On Jan 25, 2021, at 11:37 PM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com <mailto:superuser@gmail.com>> wrote:
> > 
> > This should be easy:
> > 
> > * Please double check all uses of "header" in case they should actually be "header field", and adjust as needed.
> > 
> > * In the first paragraph of Section 3, you might want to say "between 0 and 4, inclusive".
> > 
> > Apart from that, I think it looks good.  I'll request Last Call shortly.
> > 
> > -MSK, ART AD
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