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Re: [stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emergency-services-05

"Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com> Tue, 09 February 2021 06:25 UTC

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From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 08 Feb 2021 22:24:53 -0800
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Subject: Re: [stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emergency-services-05
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I think unless you've received other Last Call feedback, you can post what
you have as -06 tomorrow when Last Call closes, and we can get it on the
next available telechat.

-MSK

On Tue, Jan 26, 2021 at 11:51 AM Chris Wendt <chris-ietf@chriswendt.net>
wrote:

> Hi Murray,
>
> Thanks for the review, i have updated my local document with fixes for
> your comments, will wait to release a 06 in case any other last comments
> come in.
>
> -Chris
>
> > On Jan 25, 2021, at 11:37 PM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > This should be easy:
> >
> > * Please double check all uses of "header" in case they should actually
> be "header field", and adjust as needed.
> >
> > * In the first paragraph of Section 3, you might want to say "between 0
> and 4, inclusive".
> >
> > Apart from that, I think it looks good.  I'll request Last Call shortly.
> >
> > -MSK, ART AD
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