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Re: [stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emergency-services-05

Chris Wendt <chris-ietf@chriswendt.net> Tue, 26 January 2021 19:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emergency-services-05
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Hi Murray,

Thanks for the review, i have updated my local document with fixes for your comments, will wait to release a 06 in case any other last comments come in.

-Chris

> On Jan 25, 2021, at 11:37 PM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> This should be easy:
> 
> * Please double check all uses of "header" in case they should actually be "header field", and adjust as needed.
> 
> * In the first paragraph of Section 3, you might want to say "between 0 and 4, inclusive".
> 
> Apart from that, I think it looks good.  I'll request Last Call shortly.
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> -MSK, ART AD
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