[stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emergency-services-05
"Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com> Tue, 26 January 2021 04:38 UTC
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Subject: [stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emergency-services-05
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This should be easy: * Please double check all uses of "header" in case they should actually be "header field", and adjust as needed. * In the first paragraph of Section 3, you might want to say "between 0 and 4, inclusive". Apart from that, I think it looks good. I'll request Last Call shortly. -MSK, ART AD
- [stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emergency… Murray S. Kucherawy
- Re: [stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emerg… Chris Wendt
- Re: [stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emerg… Murray S. Kucherawy
- Re: [stir] AD review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-emerg… Chris Wendt