Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Melinda Shore's No Objection on draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge-09: (with COMMENT)

Melinda Shore <melinda.shore@nomountain.net> Sun, 17 September 2023 23:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Melinda Shore's No Objection on draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge-09: (with COMMENT)
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On 9/15/23 10:54 AM, Xavier De Foy wrote:
> Hi Melinda, we posted an update which we hope will address your
> comments (in addition to addressing some nits provided by Carsten). 
> Thank you again for your review,

I've gone through the diffs, and it looks good.  Thanks for
the edits, and I'm looking forward to this being published.

Melinda

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Melinda Shore
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