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Re: [tcpm] [Last-Call] Last Call: <draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14.txt> (Requirements for Time-Based Loss Detection) to Best Current Practice

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From: tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
To: Joseph Touch <touch@strayalpha.com>
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Subject: Re: [tcpm] [Last-Call] Last Call: <draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14.txt> (Requirements for Time-Based Loss Detection) to Best Current Practice
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From: Joseph Touch <touch@strayalpha.com>
Sent: 12 June 2020 20:38

> On Jun 12, 2020, at 10:58 AM, Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> wrote:
>
> On 2020-06-12, at 19:40, Mark Allman <mallman@icir.org> wrote:
>>
>> Signed PGP part
>>
>> (i was confused because i wouldn't call these 'terminology' or
>> 'boilerplate' ... ugh ...)
>>
>>> try  2140bis s.2 para 1
>>
>> yeah, i guess i can add an additional cite to draft
>
> The text you want to use is on page 3 of RFC 8174, which now is BCP 14 together with RFC 2119.

Agreed; I think the comment about 2140bis is a suggestion to copy the text out of that draft - not to cite the draft. But the text in our draft IS just the one verbatim from RFC 8174 as indicated.

<tp>
Joe
Taking 'our draft' as 2140bis then yes that aspect of it is correct - if it were not then I would not have cited it as an example of the text that should be there.  But 793bis has the out of date boilerplate so since this going to the TCPM list I was hoping Wesley would notice it and act on it:-)  
Tom Petch

Joe

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