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Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Mon, 27 June 2022 15:54 UTC

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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
To: 'Dhruv Dhody' <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>, 'Vishnu Pavan Beeram' <vishnupavan@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-16
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Hi Dhruv,

 

Thanks for your reviews, past and present.

 

See in line.

 

Adrian

 

From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Dhruv Dhody
Sent: 23 June 2022 18:30
To: Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com>
Cc: TEAS WG <teas@ietf.org>; TEAS WG Chairs <teas-chairs@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-16

 

Hi WG, 

 

I reviewed the document in the past. I did a pass again. Thanks, Adrian and the design team for a great job! 

 

Compared to details provided for other techniques, I found the details about RSVP-TE to be lacking. We have a section on RSVP [1] but it does not say much about RSVP-TE. Wouldn't it make sense to have an explicit section on RSVP-TE for such a comprehensive I-D? 

 

[AF] I suppose that would go after 5.1.3.2 to follow on from the last sentence of that section, and comes before 5.1.3.3 that would build on it. But you know what I am going to say…

 

[AF] I’d be happy to receive some text.

 

I also wonder if there should be some text on TE for multicast? 

 

[AF] Would that be anything that didn’t go in the RSVP-TE section?

 

Otherwise, IMHO the document is ready to be shipped! 

 

Thanks! 

Dhruv

 

[1] https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-16.html#section-5.1.3.2

 

On Tue, May 24, 2022 at 10:52 PM Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com <mailto:vishnupavan@gmail.com> > wrote:

All,

This starts working group last call on

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis/


Given the size of the document, this will be an extended
LC (3 weeks). The working group last call ends on June 14th.
Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.

Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
This is useful and important, even from authors.

Thank you,
Pavan (Co-Chair & Doc Shepherd)

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