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Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 23 June 2022 17:30 UTC

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From: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 23 Jun 2022 23:00:10 +0530
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Subject: Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-16
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Hi WG,

I reviewed the document in the past. I did a pass again. Thanks, Adrian and
the design team for a great job!

Compared to details provided for other techniques, I found the details
about RSVP-TE to be lacking. We have a section on RSVP [1] but it does not
say much about RSVP-TE. Wouldn't it make sense to have an explicit section
on RSVP-TE for such a comprehensive I-D?

I also wonder if there should be some text on TE for multicast?

Otherwise, IMHO the document is ready to be shipped!

Thanks!
Dhruv

[1]
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-16.html#section-5.1.3.2

On Tue, May 24, 2022 at 10:52 PM Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com>
wrote:

> All,
>
> This starts working group last call on
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis/
>
> Given the size of the document, this will be an extended
> LC (3 weeks). The working group last call ends on June 14th.
> Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.
>
> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
> and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
> This is useful and important, even from authors.
>
> Thank you,
> Pavan (Co-Chair & Doc Shepherd)
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