Re: [tsvwg] WGLC of draft-ietf-tsvwg-natsupp to CONCLUDE 22nd Aug 2020

Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk> Sat, 01 August 2020 10:45 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] WGLC of draft-ietf-tsvwg-natsupp to CONCLUDE 22nd Aug 2020
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Authors/WG,

Please treat the enclosed comments as a part of the WGLC proceess,


Gorry

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Subject: 	Re: [tsvwg] Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-natsupp
Date: 	Wed, 29 Jul 2020 08:47:45 +0000
From: 	mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
To: 	Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>, Michael Tuexen 
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CC: 	tsvwg@ietf.org <tsvwg@ietf.org>



Hi Gorry, all,
I support the document to advance in the publication process.

As I may not be available in the coming weeks, please find below some ** 
minor ** comments to be considered as part of the WGLC:
* pdf: 
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-tsvwg-natsupp-20-rev%20Med.pdf
* doc: 
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-tsvwg-natsupp-20-rev%20Med.docx 

Cheers,
Med