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john.loughney@nokia.com Mon, 25 August 2003 12:42 UTC

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Hi all,

Further comments:

Section 4 doesn't contain any Draft Standards ... I assume this is an oversite.

In section 5, it might be better not to list the specs that have no IPv4 dependencies,
or better yet, move them all to an appendix and list them in tabular format.

References are a little sparse, too - you may want to consider putting all
RFCs listed into the References as well.

thanks,
John

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