Re: [Txauth] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-gnap-00-00: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Txauth] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-gnap-00-00: (with COMMENT)
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Roman

Thank you for replying to my questions: everything is clear now for me.

-éric

-----Original Message-----
From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
Date: Wednesday, 24 June 2020 at 16:26
To: Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
Cc: "gnap-chairs@ietf.org" <gnap-chairs@ietf.org>, "txauth@ietf.org" <txauth@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-gnap-00-00: (with COMMENT)

    Hi Eric!

    Thanks for the review.  More inline ...

    > -----Original Message-----
    > From: iesg <iesg-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
    > Sent: Wednesday, June 24, 2020 5:15 AM
    > To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
    > Cc: gnap-chairs@ietf.org; txauth@ietf.org
    > Subject: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-gnap-00-00: (with
    > COMMENT)
    > 
    > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
    > charter-ietf-gnap-00-00: No Objection
    > 
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    > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-gnap/
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    > 
    > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
    > COMMENT:
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    > 
    > Some quick comments:
    > - the charter itself is rather verbose, sometimes convoluted, and often directive
    > (looking like the charter is about rubber stamping existing work) 

    Yes, it is long.  These words were carefully chosen after a deliberate, iterative process to gain consensus.  No existing work is getting rubber stamped -- quite the contrary, there are at least two competing proposals to form the basis of the starting point. 

    >- nits please
    > expand "AS" before first use 

    Fixed in version 00-01.

    > - missing milestones dates ? 

    Good point.  I'm working on getting these documented.

    > - should this new WG
    > work with others?

    Yes.  The 00-01 version now contains:

    "The working group will cooperate and coordinate with other IETF WGs such as
    OAUTH, and work with organizations in the community, such as the OpenID, 
    as appropriate."