[Unbearable] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14

Linda Dunbar <Linda.dunbar@huawei.com> Thu, 03 May 2018 20:35 UTC

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Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-05-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-12
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10

Summary:
The document is written very clear, easy to understand,  and content is
complete.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 2 Page 4:
Question: is "Very response" a specific response in the following sentence?  If
yes, need to provide the definition as  I don't see it being defined anywhere
  "MAY be listed by a server in a Vary response header field,.."

thank you.

Linda dunbar