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Re: [v6ops] Suresh Krishnan's Yes on draft-ietf-v6ops-host-addr-availability-06: (with COMMENT)

Lorenzo Colitti <lorenzo@google.com> Thu, 26 May 2016 04:04 UTC

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From: Lorenzo Colitti <lorenzo@google.com>
Date: Thu, 26 May 2016 13:04:08 +0900
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Subject: Re: [v6ops] Suresh Krishnan's Yes on draft-ietf-v6ops-host-addr-availability-06: (with COMMENT)
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Suresh,

thanks for the comments. We've addressed them in -07.

On Wed, May 4, 2016 at 12:14 PM, Suresh Krishnan <
suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> wrote:

> * What is the term ePDG being used here? Can you please add a reference?
> The well known term in mobile networks is Evolved Packet Data Gateway
> that is used for IPsec tunnel termination. That does not seem to make
> sense here.
>

Good catch. Clarified to:

      particularly for
      technologies like I-WLAN [TS.24327] where the two processors share
      the Wi-Fi network connection.

Better?

* Maybe worth adding a reference to RFC7278 (64share) here as an example
> for "Extending the network (e.g., "tethering")."
>

We do cite RFC7278 elsewhere. Not sure a reference is needed here, since
it's not the only way of doing tethering.


> s/which is only available in 3GPP release 10/which is only available in
> 3GPP release 10 onwards/
>

Done.


> It is not clear what this bullet means. Can you clarify?
>
> "  o  Uncertainty, because it is not known in advance if a particular
>       operation function will be available."
>

Clarified to "Uncertainty, because it is not known if a particular
operation function will be available until the provisioning operation
succeeds or fails."

Regards,
Lorenzo

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