Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt

Hi Jordi, 

Thank you for updating the draft. Below the comments that I do think are still open:

* Remove citations to individual I-Ds from the draft. 
* I'm not sure to understand the motivation for LW4O6-5. Please note that this is not equivalent to DSLITE-4 for the simple reason that in DS-Lite there are no IPv4 address assigned to the CPE from the network, while there is one for lw4o6. I suggest to delete LW4O6-5.    
* Unless I'm mistaken, I don't remember there was a conclusion about obsoleting RFC7084 or not.   

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : v6ops [mailto:v6ops-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de JORDI PALET
> MARTINEZ
> Envoyé : lundi 29 mai 2017 16:54
> À : v6ops@ietf.org
> Objet : Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> This is an updated version of this document, including the following
> changes:
> 
> 11.  ANNEX D: Changes from RFC7084-bis-01
> 
>    Section to be removed for WGLC.  Significant updates are:
> 
>    1.  G-5 added in order to comply with [RFC7608].
> 
>    2.  LW4O6-5 removed.
> 
>    3.  MAPE-3 removed.
> 
>    4.  MAPT-3 removed.
> 
>    5.  Included non-normative reference to [RFC7849] to clarify that the
>        details of the connectivity to 3GPP/LTE networks is out of the
> scope.
> 
>    6.  Split of transition in two sub-sections for the sake of clarity.
> 
> 2, 3 and 4 above (added in the previous version) were referring to the
> explicit mention of NAT behavior. As each mechanism has the relevant text
> in its respective RFC, I leave that to those documents, to avoid any
> misunderstanding or conflict.
> 
> Regards,
> Jordi
> 
> 
> -----Mensaje original-----
> De: v6ops <v6ops-bounces@ietf.org> en nombre de <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> Responder a: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> Fecha: lunes, 29 de mayo de 2017, 11:46
> Para: <i-d-announce@ietf.org>
> CC: <v6ops@ietf.org>
> Asunto: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt
> 
> 
>     A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>     This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations of the IETF.
> 
>             Title           : Basic Requirements for IPv6 Customer Edge
> Routers
>             Author          : Jordi Palet Martinez
>     	Filename        : draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt
>     	Pages           : 30
>     	Date            : 2017-05-29
> 
>     Abstract:
>        This document specifies requirements for an IPv6 Customer Edge (CE)
>        router.  Specifically, the current version of this document focuses
>        on the basic provisioning of an IPv6 CE router and the provisioning
>        of IPv6 hosts attached to it.  The document also covers several
>        transition technologies, as required in a world where IPv4
> addresses
>        are no longer available, so hosts in the customer LANs with IPv4-
> only
>        or IPv6-only applications or devices, requiring to communicate with
>        IPv4-only services at the Internet, are able to do so.  The
> document
>        obsoletes RFC 7084.
> 
> 
>     The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis/
> 
>     There are also htmlized versions available at:
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>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02
> 
>     A diff from the previous version is available at:
>     https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02
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