Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt

Hi Jordi, 

Thank you for taking care of the comments. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : v6ops [mailto:v6ops-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de JORDI PALET
> MARTINEZ
> Envoyé : samedi 10 juin 2017 12:38
> À : v6ops@ietf.org
> Objet : Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt
> 
> Hi Mohamed,
> 
> I just uploaded a new version which the following changes
> 
>    1.  LW4O6-5 removed, was a mistake due to copy-paste from DS-LITE.
> 
>    2.  Removed citation to individual I-Ds for DHCPv6 options.
> 
> Of course, you were right regarding LW406-5, good catch, it was the common
> copy/paste issue …
> 
> I also removed the reference to the individual I-D.
> 
> Regarding obsoleting or updating, I think this requires some more
> discussion, also considering the other comments received in the list.
> Let’s approach that in the next weeks.
> 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-
> bis/?include_text=1
> 
> Regards,
> Jordi
> 
> 
> -----Mensaje original-----
> De: <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
> Responder a: <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
> Fecha: miércoles, 31 de mayo de 2017, 10:10
> Para: "jordi.palet@consulintel.es" <jordi.palet@consulintel.es>,
> "v6ops@ietf.org" <v6ops@ietf.org>
> Asunto: RE: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt
> 
>     Hi Jordi,
> 
>     Thank you for updating the draft. Below the comments that I do think
> are still open:
> 
>     * Remove citations to individual I-Ds from the draft.
>     * I'm not sure to understand the motivation for LW4O6-5. Please note
> that this is not equivalent to DSLITE-4 for the simple reason that in DS-
> Lite there are no IPv4 address assigned to the CPE from the network, while
> there is one for lw4o6. I suggest to delete LW4O6-5.
>     * Unless I'm mistaken, I don't remember there was a conclusion about
> obsoleting RFC7084 or not.
> 
>     Cheers,
>     Med
> 
>     > -----Message d'origine-----
>     > De : v6ops [mailto:v6ops-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de JORDI PALET
>     > MARTINEZ
>     > Envoyé : lundi 29 mai 2017 16:54
>     > À : v6ops@ietf.org
>     > Objet : Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt
>     >
>     > Hi all,
>     >
>     > This is an updated version of this document, including the following
>     > changes:
>     >
>     > 11.  ANNEX D: Changes from RFC7084-bis-01
>     >
>     >    Section to be removed for WGLC.  Significant updates are:
>     >
>     >    1.  G-5 added in order to comply with [RFC7608].
>     >
>     >    2.  LW4O6-5 removed.
>     >
>     >    3.  MAPE-3 removed.
>     >
>     >    4.  MAPT-3 removed.
>     >
>     >    5.  Included non-normative reference to [RFC7849] to clarify that
> the
>     >        details of the connectivity to 3GPP/LTE networks is out of
> the
>     > scope.
>     >
>     >    6.  Split of transition in two sub-sections for the sake of
> clarity.
>     >
>     > 2, 3 and 4 above (added in the previous version) were referring to
> the
>     > explicit mention of NAT behavior. As each mechanism has the relevant
> text
>     > in its respective RFC, I leave that to those documents, to avoid any
>     > misunderstanding or conflict.
>     >
>     > Regards,
>     > Jordi
>     >
>     >
>     > -----Mensaje original-----
>     > De: v6ops <v6ops-bounces@ietf.org> en nombre de <internet-
> drafts@ietf.org>
>     > Responder a: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
>     > Fecha: lunes, 29 de mayo de 2017, 11:46
>     > Para: <i-d-announce@ietf.org>
>     > CC: <v6ops@ietf.org>
>     > Asunto: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt
>     >
>     >
>     >     A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-
> Drafts
>     > directories.
>     >     This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations of the IETF.
>     >
>     >             Title           : Basic Requirements for IPv6 Customer
> Edge
>     > Routers
>     >             Author          : Jordi Palet Martinez
>     >     	Filename        : draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt
>     >     	Pages           : 30
>     >     	Date            : 2017-05-29
>     >
>     >     Abstract:
>     >        This document specifies requirements for an IPv6 Customer
> Edge (CE)
>     >        router.  Specifically, the current version of this document
> focuses
>     >        on the basic provisioning of an IPv6 CE router and the
> provisioning
>     >        of IPv6 hosts attached to it.  The document also covers
> several
>     >        transition technologies, as required in a world where IPv4
>     > addresses
>     >        are no longer available, so hosts in the customer LANs with
> IPv4-
>     > only
>     >        or IPv6-only applications or devices, requiring to
> communicate with
>     >        IPv4-only services at the Internet, are able to do so.  The
>     > document
>     >        obsoletes RFC 7084.
>     >
>     >
>     >     The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>     >     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis/
>     >
>     >     There are also htmlized versions available at:
>     >     https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02
>     >     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-
> bis-02
>     >
>     >     A diff from the previous version is available at:
>     >     https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-
> 02
>     >
>     >
>     >     Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time
> of
>     > submission
>     >     until the htmlized version and diff are available at
> tools.ietf.org.
>     >
>     >     Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>     >     ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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