Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt

[JORDI PALET MARTINEZ <[e-mail]>]

Hi Mohamed,

I just uploaded a new version which the following changes

   1.  LW4O6-5 removed, was a mistake due to copy-paste from DS-LITE.

   2.  Removed citation to individual I-Ds for DHCPv6 options.

Of course, you were right regarding LW406-5, good catch, it was the common copy/paste issue …

I also removed the reference to the individual I-D.

Regarding obsoleting or updating, I think this requires some more discussion, also considering the other comments received in the list. Let’s approach that in the next weeks.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis/?include_text=1

Regards,
Jordi
 

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    Hi Jordi, 
    
    Thank you for updating the draft. Below the comments that I do think are still open:
    
    * Remove citations to individual I-Ds from the draft. 
    * I'm not sure to understand the motivation for LW4O6-5. Please note that this is not equivalent to DSLITE-4 for the simple reason that in DS-Lite there are no IPv4 address assigned to the CPE from the network, while there is one for lw4o6. I suggest to delete LW4O6-5.    
    * Unless I'm mistaken, I don't remember there was a conclusion about obsoleting RFC7084 or not.   
    
    Cheers,
    Med
    
    > -----Message d'origine-----
    > De : v6ops [mailto:[e-mail]] De la part de JORDI PALET
    > MARTINEZ
    > Envoyé : lundi 29 mai 2017 16:54
    > À : [e-mail]
    > Objet : Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt
    > 
    > Hi all,
    > 
    > This is an updated version of this document, including the following
    > changes:
    > 
    > 11.  ANNEX D: Changes from RFC7084-bis-01
    > 
    >    Section to be removed for WGLC.  Significant updates are:
    > 
    >    1.  G-5 added in order to comply with [RFC7608].
    > 
    >    2.  LW4O6-5 removed.
    > 
    >    3.  MAPE-3 removed.
    > 
    >    4.  MAPT-3 removed.
    > 
    >    5.  Included non-normative reference to [RFC7849] to clarify that the
    >        details of the connectivity to 3GPP/LTE networks is out of the
    > scope.
    > 
    >    6.  Split of transition in two sub-sections for the sake of clarity.
    > 
    > 2, 3 and 4 above (added in the previous version) were referring to the
    > explicit mention of NAT behavior. As each mechanism has the relevant text
    > in its respective RFC, I leave that to those documents, to avoid any
    > misunderstanding or conflict.
    > 
    > Regards,
    > Jordi
    > 
    > 
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    > De: v6ops <[e-mail]> en nombre de <[e-mail]>
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    > Asunto: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt
    > 
    > 
    >     A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
    > directories.
    >     This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations of the IETF.
    > 
    >             Title           : Basic Requirements for IPv6 Customer Edge
    > Routers
    >             Author          : Jordi Palet Martinez
    >     	Filename        : draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02.txt
    >     	Pages           : 30
    >     	Date            : 2017-05-29
    > 
    >     Abstract:
    >        This document specifies requirements for an IPv6 Customer Edge (CE)
    >        router.  Specifically, the current version of this document focuses
    >        on the basic provisioning of an IPv6 CE router and the provisioning
    >        of IPv6 hosts attached to it.  The document also covers several
    >        transition technologies, as required in a world where IPv4
    > addresses
    >        are no longer available, so hosts in the customer LANs with IPv4-
    > only
    >        or IPv6-only applications or devices, requiring to communicate with
    >        IPv4-only services at the Internet, are able to do so.  The
    > document
    >        obsoletes RFC 7084.
    > 
    > 
    >     The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
    >     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis/
    > 
    >     There are also htmlized versions available at:
    >     https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02
    >     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02
    > 
    >     A diff from the previous version is available at:
    >     https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc7084-bis-02
    > 
    > 
    >     Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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    >     until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
    > 
    >     Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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