Re: [v6ops] transition-ipv4aas: positioning the draft

JORDI PALET MARTINEZ <jordi.palet@consulintel.es> Thu, 26 April 2018 07:34 UTC

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I believe an RFC can update a previous one in any sense.

So, what I'm suggesting is deleting a section that now includes DS-Lite and 6rd, but only including DS-Lite in the new document.

Current section "4.4.  Transition Technologies Support", includes only 2 sub-sections 4.4.1 6rd, and 4.4.2. Nothing else. So I'm suggesting that we copy 4.4.2, as suggested by Barbara, but left out 4.4.1.

Regards,
Jordi
 
 
-----Mensaje original-----
De: <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
Fecha: jueves, 26 de abril de 2018, 9:27
Para: JORDI PALET MARTINEZ <jordi.palet@consulintel.es>, V6 Ops List <v6ops@ietf.org>
Asunto: RE: [v6ops] transition-ipv4aas: positioning the draft

    Re-,
    
    I don't parse well what is meant by an update which consists in moving the content from an RFC to another "future" RFC. 
    
    Cheers,
    Med
    
    > -----Message d'origine-----
    > De : v6ops [mailto:v6ops-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de JORDI PALET MARTINEZ
    > Envoyé : jeudi 26 avril 2018 09:07
    > À : V6 Ops List
    > Objet : Re: [v6ops] transition-ipv4aas: positioning the draft
    > 
    > Hi Med,
    > 
    > My personal opinion is still that a bis makes more sense, but I think that
    > train already left.
    > 
    > So, what I think it make sense now is to update only the transition section
    > on RFC7084 in this new document, may be something like:
    > 
    > "This document updates RFC7084 by deleting section 4.4. RFC7084 is, as a
    > consequence, reduced in scope to the specification of requirements for an
    > IPv6 Customer Edge, not including transition support, so all the transition
    > requirements are defined instead, in this document."
    > 
    > Then we avoid any mention of 6rd and include the DS-Lite section in this
    > document.
    > 
    > Med, Barbara, what do you think?
    > 
    > Regards,
    > Jordi
    > 
    > 
    > -----Mensaje original-----
    > De: v6ops <v6ops-bounces@ietf.org> en nombre de
    > <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
    > Fecha: jueves, 26 de abril de 2018, 8:20
    > Para: "STARK, BARBARA H" <bs7652@att.com>, V6 Ops List <v6ops@ietf.org>
    > Asunto: Re: [v6ops] transition-ipv4aas: positioning the draft
    > 
    >     Re-,
    > 
    >     I do think this would be so simple if the WG went for a bis document.
    > 
    >     I don't understand the rationale for duplicating DS-Lite content given
    > that Jordi's I-D points to 7084.
    > 
    >     Cheers,
    >     Med
    > 
    >     > -----Message d'origine-----
    >     > De : v6ops [mailto:v6ops-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de STARK, BARBARA
    > H
    >     > Envoyé : mercredi 25 avril 2018 20:59
    >     > À : V6 Ops List
    >     > Objet : [v6ops] transition-ipv4aas: positioning the draft
    >     >
    >     > I have a number of comments for draft-palet-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas.
    > I'm
    >     > grouping comments under different email subject headers so it's easier
    > to
    >     > track the topic of any resulting discussion.
    >     >
    >     > The first area of comments I have is on how to position this draft
    > relative
    >     > to RFC 7084 and in a way that will maximize its impact and likelihood
    > of
    >     > achieving its goal (which I think is to drive availability of CE
    > routers that
    >     > support *all* of the included transition technologies).
    >     >
    >     > I notice the draft introduces the term "IPv6 transition CE". Sometimes
    > this
    >     > is "IPv6 transition CE router". I like this idea, but would suggest
    >     > capitalizing and using the longer "IPv6 Transition CE Router". I think
    > if
    >     > this is a more formal term and this draft is positioned as defining
    >     > requirements for an IPv6 Transition CE Router (rather than simply
    > specifying
    >     > "the transition requirements for an IPv6 Customer Edge (CE) router")
    > then it
    >     > becomes ok to make most of the SHOULD requirements into a MUST. That
    > is, the
    >     > draft is not an extension of a CE Router (RFC 7084). It's something new
    > that
    >     > is specified and defined here. And should be the title of the draft.
    >     >
    >     > Saying "MUST" is stronger than "SHOULD" and will increase likelihood of
    >     > success. It will also increase likelihood that *all* of the included
    >     > technologies are implemented (as currently written it would be possible
    > to do
    >     > one or 2 of the technologies and still claim compliance). And it will
    > make it
    >     > easier to create a subsequent certification program, if there is demand
    > for
    >     > one. If the MUST statements apply only to the IPv6 Transition CE Router
    > this
    >     > draft defines, then there is no problem with saying "MUST". The
    > requirements
    >     > have no scope outside this draft.
    >     >
    >     > ----------
    >     >
    >     > If taking this approach, requirements for DS-Lite would need to be
    > included.
    >     > Those can be copied from RFC 7084.
    >     >
    >     > ----------
    >     >
    >     > RFC 7084 can still be a basis for this new thing (MUST comply with RFC
    > 7084).
    >     >
    >     > The current requirement for RFC 7084 compliance is "The IPv6 Transition
    > CE
    >     > router must comply with all the requirements stated in [RFC7084]."
    >     > I suggest staying away from "all the requirements", since the RFC 7084
    > SHOULD
    >     > and MAY requirements are also requirements, and I don't think it's
    > intended
    >     > to mandate those. I recommend simply saying:
    >     > The IPv6 Transition CE router MUST comply with [RFC7084].
    >     >
    >     > ---------
    >     >
    >     > If done this way, I don't think it's necessary to make mention of 6rd
    > in any
    >     > way. It's omission from this draft will make it clear that it's not a
    >     > component of an IPv6 Transition CE Router.
    >     >
    >     >
    >     > Barbara
    >     >
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