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Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-03.txt

Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 21 September 2022 12:45 UTC

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From: Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 21 Sep 2022 08:45:44 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-03.txt
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Many thanks Olaf! The draft has sent to the IESG now.

Yours,
Daniel

On Wed, Sep 21, 2022 at 7:35 AM Olaf Bergmann <bergmann@tzi.org> wrote:

> Hi Daniel,
>
> On 2022-09-19, Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > You are correct, it might be clearer to keep it.
>
> Thanks. I have now submitted -04 that removes the reference to RFC
> 9202 from the abstract.
>
> Grüße
> Olaf
>
> > On Mon, Sep 19, 2022 at 10:29 AM Olaf Bergmann <bergmann@tzi.org> wrote:
> >
> >  Hi Daniel,
> >
> >  Thanks for pushing this document forward.
> >
> >  On 2022-09-16, Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> >  > There two nits to address before the draft can be moved forward .
> >  >
> >  >   ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC9202]), which it
> >  >      shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight textual mentions
> of the
> >  >      documents in question.
> >
> >  Okay, I will fix this.
> >
> >  >  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 6347 (Obsoleted by RFC 9147)
> >
> >  The full text reads:
> >
> >     [RFC9202] only specifies the use of DTLS [RFC6347] [RFC9147] but
> >     works equally well for TLS [RFC8446].
> >
> >  The reference to DTLS version 1.2 is explicitly included because RFC
> >  9202 specifies the use of DTLS version 1.2 (and mentions that DTLS
> >  version 1.3 can be used instead).
> >
> >  I am happy to delete the reference to DTLS 1.2 but I am wondering if
> >  this could lead to confusion?
> >
> >  Grüße
> >  Olaf
>


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Daniel Migault
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