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Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-03.txt

Olaf Bergmann <bergmann@tzi.org> Mon, 19 September 2022 14:29 UTC

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From: Olaf Bergmann <bergmann@tzi.org>
To: Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-03.txt
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Hi Daniel,

Thanks for pushing this document forward.

On 2022-09-16, Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> There two nits to address before the draft can be moved forward . 
>
>   ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC9202]), which it
>      shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the
>      documents in question.

Okay, I will fix this.

>  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 6347 (Obsoleted by RFC 9147)

The full text reads:

   [RFC9202] only specifies the use of DTLS [RFC6347] [RFC9147] but
   works equally well for TLS [RFC8446].

The reference to DTLS version 1.2 is explicitly included because RFC
9202 specifies the use of DTLS version 1.2 (and mentions that DTLS
version 1.3 can be used instead).

I am happy to delete the reference to DTLS 1.2 but I am wondering if
this could lead to confusion?

Grüße
Olaf

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