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Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 16 September 2022 16:58 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-03.txt
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Hi all,

Please find the shepherd write-up. Feel free to provide any comments before
we move the document forward.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize/shepherdwriteup/
Yours,
Daniel

On Fri, Sep 16, 2022 at 12:05 PM Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Olaf,
>
> There two nits to address before the draft can be moved forward .
>
>   ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC9202]), which it
>      shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the
>      documents in question.
>  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 6347 (Obsoleted by RFC 9147)
>
> Yours,
> Daniel
>
>
> On Fri, Sep 2, 2022 at 5:33 AM Olaf Bergmann <bergmann@tzi.org> wrote:
>
>> Dear all,
>>
>> to celebrate the publication of this WG's recent RFCs, I have
>> updated the references to the ACE OAuth framework and profiles in
>> the ace-extend-dtls document.
>>
>> Another small change is referencing RFC9147 in alignment with the
>> finalized wording of RFC9202.
>>
>> Grüße
>> Olaf
>>
>>
>> On 2022-09-02, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>
>> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> > This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for
>> Constrained Environments WG of the IETF.
>> >
>> >         Title           : Extension of the CoAP-DTLS Profile for ACE to
>> TLS
>> >         Authors         : Olaf Bergmann
>> >                           John Preuß Mattsson
>> >                           Göran Selander
>> >   Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-03.txt
>> >   Pages           : 6
>> >   Date            : 2022-09-02
>> >
>> > Abstract:
>> >    This document updates the CoAP-DTLS profile for ACE [RFC9202] by
>> >    specifying that the profile applies to TLS as well as DTLS.
>> >
>> > Discussion Venues
>> >
>> >    This note is to be removed before publishing as an RFC.
>> >
>> >    Discussion of this document takes place on the Authentication and
>> >    Authorization for Constrained Environments Working Group mailing list
>> >    (ace@ietf.org), which is archived at
>> >    https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/ace/.
>> >
>> >    Source for this draft and an issue tracker can be found at
>> >    https://github.com/ace-wg/ace-extend-dtls-authorize.
>> >
>> >
>> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize/
>> >
>> > There is also an HTML version available at:
>> >
>> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-03.html
>> >
>> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> >
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-03
>> >
>> >
>> > Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org:
>> :internet-drafts
>> >
>> >
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> Daniel Migault
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