Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-bier-te-arch-13> for your review
Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 31 August 2022 14:01 UTC
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-bier-te-arch-13> for your review
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On August 30, 2022 at 2:35:55 PM, Lynne Bartholomew wrote: > > On Aug 26, 2022, at 11:23 AM, Toerless Eckert wrote: Lynne/Toerless: Hi! I've been thinking about this point: > > (64) [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the > > online Style Guide at , > > and let us know if any changes are needed. Aside from "native", our script > > did not identify problematic terms. > > > > I could not find on those URLs a place where "native" was listed as > > problematic, where/what is the script you are using ? I looked at several external references and found some discussions mostly about using "native" to refer to specific groups of people, and how to correctly do that. But that doesn't apply here since the text is not referring to people. There are two places where "native" is used in the draft: If the BIER-TE topology represents (a subset of) the underlying (Layer 2) topology of the network as shown in the first example, this may be called a "native" BIER-TE topology. A topology consisting only of "forward_routed()" adjacencies as shown in the second example may be called an "overlay" BIER-TE topology. A BIER-TE topology with both forward_connected() and forward_routed() adjacencies may be called a "hybrid" BIER-TE topology. ... 1. Determine the desired BIER-TE topology for BIER-TE subdomains: the native and/or overlay adjacencies that are assigned to BPs. Topology discovery is discussed in Section 3.2.1.1, and the various aspects of the BIER-TE controller's determinations regarding the topology are discussed throughout Section 5. I agree with Toerless that there's no common well-known one-word replacement for "native". The computing related term that is often suggested is "built-in", but that doesn't fit here. OTOH, I wonder if we can come up with an alternative based on the context, especially because there are only two occurrences and the second one refers to the definition of the first. The differentiation between "native", "overlay", and "hybrid" topologies is the type of adjacencies: a "native topology" only has forward_connected() adjacencies. I think we can call this type of topology a "connected topology" without any loss of meaning while reinforcing the adjacency concepts. Please consider this replacement. Thanks! Alvaro.
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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Toerless Eckert
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Toerless Eckert
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Toerless Eckert
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Alvaro Retana
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Toerless Eckert
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Toerless Eckert
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Alvaro Retana
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Toerless Eckert
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Grégory CAUCHIE
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Michael Menth
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Michael Menth
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Michael Menth
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Gregory CAUCHIE
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Toerless Eckert
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9262 <draft-ietf-b… Lynne Bartholomew