Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9486 <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-ipv6-options-12> for your review
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From: Shwetha Bhandari <shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com>
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9486 <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-ipv6-options-12> for your review
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Hi Sarah, Thanks for the updates. Much appreciated, the new version looks good to me too, I approve. Thanks Shwetha On Tue, 26 Sept 2023, 1:12 pm Frank Brockners (fbrockne), < fbrockne@cisco.com> wrote: > Hi Sarah, > > Thanks a lot for implementing the changes this quickly - and thanks for > all your help improving the document and catching even small nits. Great > work. > The documents looks good to me, i.e., I approve. > > Cheers, Frank > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Sarah Tarrant <starrant@amsl.com> > > Sent: Monday, 25 September 2023 20:32 > > To: Shwetha <shwetha.bhandari@gmail.com>; Frank Brockners (fbrockne) > > <fbrockne@cisco.com> > > Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; Shwetha Bhandari > > <shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com>; ippm-ads@ietf.org; ippm- > > chairs@ietf.org; marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com; Martin Duke > > <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9486 <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-ipv6-options- > > 12> for your review > > > > Hello Frank and Swetha, > > > > Thank you for your replies. > > > > We have updated the document according to Frank’s reply. > > > > Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not > > make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Please contact us with > > any further updates or with your approval of the document in its current > > form. Note that we will await approvals from each author prior to moving > > forward in the publication process. > > > > Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not > > make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any > > further updates or with your approval of the document in its current > form. > > We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the > > publication process. > > > > Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view the > > most recent version. > > > > Updated XML file: > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9486.xml__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!P2uLMJ87Ax95ANmrAda6ftjYdCgqXIAyizMCsrTWzOXi0ox52eOHm8XpPlps3vNvhgjxjkTKnpzxDulMwp4JohndnQ$ > > > > Updated output files: > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9486.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!P2uLMJ87Ax95ANmrAda6ftjYdCgqXIAyizMCsrTWzOXi0ox52eOHm8XpPlps3vNvhgjxjkTKnpzxDulMwp7rOS3unA$ > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9486.txt__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!P2uLMJ87Ax95ANmrAda6ftjYdCgqXIAyizMCsrTWzOXi0ox52eOHm8XpPlps3vNvhgjxjkTKnpzxDulMwp4ms7tepg$ > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9486.pdf__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!P2uLMJ87Ax95ANmrAda6ftjYdCgqXIAyizMCsrTWzOXi0ox52eOHm8XpPlps3vNvhgjxjkTKnpzxDulMwp5BpWLUwg$ > > > > Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48: > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9486-auth48diff.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!P2uLMJ87Ax95ANmrAda6ftjYdCgqXIAyizMCsrTWzOXi0ox52eOHm8XpPlps3vNvhgjxjkTKnpzxDulMwp5FkOZpSg$ > > > > Comprehensive Diffs: > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9486-diff.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!P2uLMJ87Ax95ANmrAda6ftjYdCgqXIAyizMCsrTWzOXi0ox52eOHm8XpPlps3vNvhgjxjkTKnpzxDulMwp7WrDdMcg$ > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9486-rfcdiff.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!P2uLMJ87Ax95ANmrAda6ftjYdCgqXIAyizMCsrTWzOXi0ox52eOHm8XpPlps3vNvhgjxjkTKnpzxDulMwp73KQ_MLg$ > (side-by-side diff) > > > > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9486__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!P2uLMJ87Ax95ANmrAda6ftjYdCgqXIAyizMCsrTWzOXi0ox52eOHm8XpPlps3vNvhgjxjkTKnpzxDulMwp7tkk5sPw$ > > > > Thank you, > > > > RFC Editor/st > > > > > On Sep 23, 2023, at 8:08 AM, Shwetha <shwetha.bhandari@gmail.com> > > wrote: > > > > > > Thanks much for the review and suggestions. +1 to Frank's response to > > the suggestions. > > > Looks good to me. > > > > > > Thanks > > > Shwetha > > > > > > On Sat, 23 Sept 2023, 6:21 pm Frank Brockners (fbrockne), > > <fbrockne@cisco.com> wrote: > > > Dear RFC editor, > > > > > > Thanks a lot for your review and suggestions. Please see inline below. > > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > > > From: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> > > > > Sent: Friday, 22 September 2023 07:02 > > > > To: shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com; Frank Brockners (fbrockne) > > > > <fbrockne@cisco.com> > > > > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; ippm-ads@ietf.org; > > > > ippm-chairs@ietf.org; marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com; > > > > martin.h.duke@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > > > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9486 > > > > <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-ipv6-options- > > > > 12> for your review > > > > > > > > Authors, > > > > > > > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > > > > necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > > > > > > > 1) <!--[rfced] Would you like to rephrase the RFC's title as follows > > > > in order for "(IOAM)" to be included, similar to the title of RFC > 9197? > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > In-situ OAM IPv6 Options > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > In Situ Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) IPv6 > > > > Options > > > > > > > > Perhaps: > > > > IPv6 Options for In Situ Operations, Administration, and > > > > Maintenance > > > > (IOAM) > > > > --> > > > > > > ...FB: Agreed. Consistency with RFC 9197 is a good thing. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear > > > > in the > > > > title) for use on > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/search__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!P2uLMJ87Ax95ANmrAda6ftjYdCgqXIAyizMCsrTWzOXi0ox52eOHm8XpPlps3vNvhgjxjkTKnpzxDulMwp5vgG2lvw$ > . > > > > --> > > > > > > ...FB: Given that this document is about the encapsulation of IOAM into > > IPv6 options, IMHO the keywords in the title are sufficient. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] Section 1: To closely match the text in RFC 9197, > > > > should this text be updated to add "that IOAM is enabled for"? > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > The terms "encapsulation" and "decapsulation" are used in this > > > > document in the same way as in [RFC9197]: An IOAM encapsulating > > node > > > > incorporates one or more IOAM-Option-Types into packets. > > > > > > > > Perhaps: > > > > The terms "encapsulation" and "decapsulation" are used in this > > > > document in the same way as in [RFC9197]: An IOAM encapsulating > > node > > > > incorporates one or more IOAM-Option-Types into packets > > > > that IOAM is enabled for. > > > > --> > > > > > > ...FB: Agreed. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] Section 3: FYI, in order to make it clear that the > > > > list goes with "Option Data", we have updated the text for as > > > > follows and changed the indentation of the list. Please review and > let us > > know if you prefer otherwise. > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > Option Data: Variable-length field. Option-Type-specific data. > > > > > > > > IOAM Option data is inserted as follows: > > > > > > > > 1. Pre-allocated Trace Option: ... > > > > [...] > > > > > > > > 2. Proof of Transit Option: ... > > > > [...] > > > > > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > Option Data: Variable-length field. The data is specific to the > > > > Option Type, as detailed below. > > > > > > > > Pre-allocated Trace Option: ... > > > > > > > > Option Type: ... > > > > > > > > IOAM Type: ... > > > > > > > > Proof of Transit Option: ... > > > > > > > > Option Type: ... > > > > > > > > IOAM Type: ... > > > > --> > > > > > > ...FB: Agreed. The enumeration also didn't make a lot of sense, i.e., > the > > simple list like you have it now, is better. > > > > > > > > > > > > 5) <!--[rfced] Section 3: The term "4n alignment" has not been used > > > > in in other RFCs. Would you like to update it as follows or > otherwise? > > > > (The surrounding text is included for context; it uses the phrase "a > > > > multiple- > > > > of-4 offset".) > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > All the IOAM IPv6 options defined here have alignment > requirements. > > > > Specifically, they all require 4n alignment. This ensures that > > > > fields specified in [RFC9197] are aligned at a multiple-of-4 > offset > > > > from the start of the hop-by-hop and destination options header. > > > > > > > > Perhaps: > > > > All the IOAM IPv6 options defined here have alignment > requirements. > > > > Specifically, they all require alignment on multiples of 4 bytes. > > > > This ensures that fields specified in [RFC9197] are aligned at > > > > a multiple-of-4 offset from the start of the hop-by-hop and > > > > destination options header. > > > > --> > > > > > > ...FB: Agreed. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 6) <!--[rfced] Section 6: To confirm, is it intentional that the > > > > descriptions of the two option types exactly match? > > > > Both are "IOAM Destination Option and IOAM Hop-by-Hop Option", as > > > > shown in the registry ( > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/ipv6-__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!P2uLMJ87Ax95ANmrAda6ftjYdCgqXIAyizMCsrTWzOXi0ox52eOHm8XpPlps3vNvhgjxjkTKnpzxDulMwp5SAIBTvw$ > > > > parameters/). > > > > --> > > > > > > ...FB: This is probably the best we can do. TBD_1_0 (0x11) and TBD_1_1 > > (0x31) apply to both hop-by-hop as well as destination options. An > > alternative would be to explicitly spell out which IOAM option types > apply > > to which value - which would make the registry entries very long and also > > would require updating them, as soon as any newly defined IOAM option > > type would use a code point. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] Contributors section > > > > > > > > FYI, per Section 4.1.1 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"), we updated > > > > the document to have one section titled "Contributors". We have > > > > removed the sentence about "and the end of this document" and used > > > > the contact information from the "Contributors' Addresses". > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > Contributors > > > > > > > > This document was the collective effort of several authors. The > text > > > > and content were contributed by the editors and the coauthors > listed > > > > below. > > > > > > > > Carlos Pignataro > > > > [...] > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > ...FB: ACK. Makes sense. > > > > > > > > > > > 8) <!-- [rfced] Please review these terms and let us know if it's > > > > acceptable to update to the form on the right to match past RFCs, > > particularly RFC 9197. > > > > > > > > Edge to Edge Option -> Edge-to-Edge Option > > > > IOAM data fields -> IOAM Data-Fields > > > > IOAM E2E option -> IOAM E2E Option > > > > IOAM Option Type -> OAM Option-Type > > > > IOAM domain -> IOAM-Domain > > > > IOAM-Opt-Type -> IOAM Opt-Type > > > > IOAM-Option-Types -> IOAM Option-Types > > > > Option Type vs. Option-Type -> Option-Type > > > > Proof of Transit Option -> Proof of Transit Option-Type > > > > --> > > > > > > ...FB: Perfect. Thanks for driving towards consistency. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added expansions for abbreviations > > > > upon first use per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). > > > > Please review each expansion in the document carefully to ensure > > correctness. > > > > --> > > > > > > ...FB: Thanks. All your expansions look good to me. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of > > > > the online Style Guide < > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!P2uLMJ87Ax95ANmrAda6ftjYdCgqXIAyizMCsrTWzOXi0ox52eOHm8XpPlps3vNvhgjxjkTKnpzxDulMwp6uNY9kgA$ > > > > editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > > > > and let us know if any changes are needed. > > > > > > > > Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this > > > > should still be reviewed as a best practice. > > > > --> > > > > > > ..FB: Thanks. I did not catch any issues either. > > > > > > Thanks a lot for all the updates and suggested edits. With those, the > doc > > looks ready to me. > > > > > > Thanks, Frank > > > > > > > > > > > > Thank you. > > > > > > > > RFC Editor/st/ar > > > > > > > > > > > > On Sep 21, 2023, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: > > > > > > > > *****IMPORTANT***** > > > > > > > > Updated 2023/09/21 > > > > > > > > RFC Author(s): > > > > -------------- > > > > > > > > Instructions for Completing AUTH48 > > > > > > > > Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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