Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-11> for your review

[Barak Gafni <[e-mail]>]

Hello RFC Editor Team,

I approve the document too. I do not have further comments.

Thanks,
Barak

-----Original Message-----
From: Frank Brockners (fbrockne) <[e-mail]> 
Sent: Thursday, October 20, 2022 7:52 AM
To: Megan Ferguson <[e-mail]>; Shwetha Bhandari <[e-mail]>
Cc: Tal Mizrahi <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]; [e-mail]; Barak Gafni <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail]
Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-11> for your review

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Hi Megan,

Thanks - and thanks for accommodating the address fix.

Cheers, Frank

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Megan Ferguson <[e-mail]>
> Sent: Thursday, 20 October 2022 16:47
> To: Shwetha Bhandari <[e-mail]>
> Cc: Frank Brockners (fbrockne) <[e-mail]>; Tal Mizrahi 
> <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]; 
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> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 
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> Greetings Shwetha, Frank, and Haoyu,
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> > On Oct 19, 2022, at 1:50 AM, Shwetha Bhandari
> <[e-mail]> wrote:
> >
> > Hello RFC Editor Team,
> >
> > I approve the document too. I do not have further comments.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Shwetha
> >
> > On Wed, Oct 12, 2022 at 1:00 AM Frank Brockners (fbrockne)
> <[e-mail]> wrote:
> > Hi RFC Editor Team, Tal,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for the edits. I also approve the doc, subject to a few 
> > changes -
> see inline on top of Tal's changes - and below (address change).
> >
> > Tal - note there is one delta between our comments - see inline.
> >
> > In addition, the editorial changes that were done to my address 
> > render it
> wrong.
> >
> > OLD:
> >    Frank Brockners
> >    Cisco Systems, Inc.
> >    3rd Floor
> >    Hansaallee 249
> >    40549 Duesseldorf
> >    Germany
> >    Email: [e-mail]
> >
> > NEW
> >    Frank Brockners
> >    Cisco Systems, Inc.
> >    Hansaallee 249
> >    40549 Duesseldorf
> >    Germany
> >    Email: [e-mail]
> >
> > If you really want to mention the floor (I suggest to drop it), then 
> > it needs to
> go below the "Hansaallee 249":
> >    Frank Brockners
> >    Cisco Systems, Inc.
> >    Hansaallee 249
> >    3rd Floor
> >    40549 Duesseldorf
> >    Germany
> >    Email: [e-mail]
> >
> > Thanks again, Frank
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Tal Mizrahi <[e-mail]>
> > > Sent: Saturday, 8 October 2022 13:59
> > > To: [e-mail]
> > > Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail]; Frank Brockners
> > > (fbrockne) <[e-mail]>; [e-mail];
> > > ippm- [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail]; 
> > > [e-mail]; [e-mail]
> > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 
> > > <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-11>
> > > for your review
> > >
> > > Dear RFC Editor Team,
> > >
> > > Thanks for your work on this document.
> > > I approve the document, subject to the comments below.
> > > Please see my responses and comments inline, marked [TM].
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > > Tal.
> > >
> > > On Sat, Oct 8, 2022 at 3:04 AM <[e-mail]> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > Authors,
> > > >
> > > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
> > > > necessary)
> > > the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
> > > >
> > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has 
> > > > been updated as
> > > follows:
> > > >
> > > > a) Abbreviations have been expanded per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 
> > > > ("RFC Style Guide").
> > > >
> > > > b) The hyphen in "In-situ" has been removed to be consistent 
> > > > with recently published IOAM documents. Please review.
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > > In-situ OAM Direct Exporting
> > > >
> > > > Current:
> > > > In Situ Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (IOAM) 
> > > > Direct Exporting
> > > > -->
> > >
> > > [TM] Looks good.
> > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] We had the following questions related to similar text in
> > > >      both the Abstract and Introduction:
> > > >
> > > > Original (Abstract):
> > > > This document introduces a new IOAM option type (denoted
> > > > IOAM-Option-Type) called the Direct Export (DEX) Option-Type, 
> > > > which is used as a trigger for IOAM data to be directly exported 
> > > > or locally aggregated without being pushed into in-flight data packets.
> > > >
> > > > Original (Introduction):
> > > > This document defines a new IOAM-Option-Type called the Direct 
> > > > Export
> > > > (DEX) Option-Type.  This Option-Type is used as a trigger for 
> > > > IOAM nodes to locally aggregate and process IOAM data, and/or to 
> > > > export it to a receiving entity (or entities).
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > a) We have updated mentions in the text above to use "IOAM 
> > > > Direct Export (DEX) Option-Type" to exactly match its use at
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> > > > let us know any objections and/or if similar changes should be 
> > > > made elsewhere in the
> > > document (specifically the IANA Considerations section?).
> > >
> > > [TM] Looks good, and in my opinion there is no need for further changes.
> > >
> > > >
> > > > b) There is some difference in the description of how the DEX 
> > > > Option-Type is used in the Intro and Abstract.  Please let us 
> > > > know if/how these instances should be made consistent.
> > >
> > > [TM] I would be fine with the current text. In my opinion there is 
> > > no need for the abstract and introduction to be identical.
> > >
> > > >
> > > > -->
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We changed "Direct EXporting" to "Direct 
> > > > Exporting" for
> > > consistency throughout the document. Please let us know of any objections.
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > > DEX: Direct EXporting
> > > >
> > > > Current:
> > > > DEX: Direct Exporting
> > > > -->
> > >
> > > [TM] Looks good.
> > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We rearranged parts of this sentence and added more
> > > >      context (specifically to the content in parenthesis) for ease of the
> > > >      reader. Please let us know of any objections.
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > > An IOAM encapsulating node configured to incorporate the DEX 
> > > > Option-Type encapsulates (possibly a subset of) the packets it 
> > > > forwards with the DEX Option-Type, and MAY export and/or collect 
> > > > the requested IOAM data immediately.
> > > >
> > > > Current:
> > > > An IOAM encapsulating node configured to incorporate the DEX 
> > > > Option-Type encapsulates the packets (and possibly a subset of 
> > > > the
> > > > packets) it forwards with the DEX Option-Type and MAY export 
> > > > and/or collect the requested IOAM data immediately.
> > >
> > > [TM] I suggest the following change:
> > > OLD:
> > > and possibly a subset
> > > NEW:
> > > or possibly a subset
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > > -->
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 5) <!-- [rfced] Will readers know what "it" is referring to in this
> > > >      sentence?
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > > Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX 
> > > > Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX 
> > > > Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are 
> > > > forwarded by it.
> > > >
> > > > Perhaps:
> > > > Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX 
> > > > Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX 
> > > > Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are 
> > > > forwarded by the DEX Option-Type.
> > > > -->
> > > >
> > >
> > > [TM] Looks good.
> >
> > [FB] IMHO the new proposal is confusing to say the least. The new 
> > text could
> be read as if the DEX Option-Type would forward packets. Whereas it is 
> the IOAM encapsulating node that forwards the packets.
> >
> > Suggestion:
> >
> > ORIGINAL:
> > Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX 
> > Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX 
> > Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are 
> > forwarded by it.
> >
> > NEW:
> > Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX 
> > Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX 
> > Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are 
> > forwarded by the IOAM encapsulating node.
> >
> > >
> > > >
> > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] We suggest rephrasing and condensing this 
> > > > sentence, as it may
> > > be difficult to parse for some readers due to the number of adverbs.
> > > Would the suggested text change the original meaning of the sentence?
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > > As mentioned above, the data can be locally collected, and 
> > > > optionally can be aggregated and exported to a receiving entity, 
> > > > either proactively or on-demand.
> > > >
> > > > Perhaps:
> > > > As mentioned above, the data can be locally collected, 
> > > > aggregated, and exported to a receiving entity proactively or on-demand.
> > > > -->
> > >
> > > [TM] Yes, except that I suggest replacing "and" with "and/or".
> > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] FYI: In Section 3.2, we updated the terms "Optional
> > > >      fields", "Flow ID", and "Sequence Number" to fall under a nested
> > > >      definition list. Please confirm that this accurately describes
> > > >      the figure and let us know if there are any objections.
> > > > -->
> > >
> > > [TM] Looks good.
> > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 8) <!--[rfced] FYI - I-D.ietf-ippm-ioam-flags is in AUTH48 state. We have
> > > >      updated the reference in this document to point to the RFC-to-be info
> > > >      assuming that document will be published before this one.  Please
> > > >      advise on how you would like to proceed in the event that
> > > >      I-D.ietf-ippm-ioam-flags does not complete AUTH48 prior to this
> > > >      doc (i.e., revert the reference to the I-D format or hold on
> > > >      publication of this document?).-->
> > > >
> > >
> > > [TM] There is no reason why the flags document should be delayed.
> > > Let's proceed with the reference to the RFC number.
> > >
> > > >
> > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion 
> > > > of the online
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> > > [TM] In my opinion there is no need for any changes in this context.
> > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Thank you.
> > > >
> > > > RFC Editor/mc/mf
> > > >
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> > > > --------------------------------------
> > > > RFC9326 (draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-11)
> > > >
> > > > Title            : In-situ OAM Direct Exporting
> > > > Author(s)        : H. Song, B. Gafni, F. Brockners, S. Bhandari, T. Mizrahi
> > > > WG Chair(s)      : Marcus Ihlar, Tommy Pauly
> > > > Area Director(s) : Martin Duke, Zaheduzzaman Sarker
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