Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-11> for your review
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From: "Frank Brockners (fbrockne)" <fbrockne@cisco.com>
To: Tal Mizrahi <tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com>, "rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org" <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
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Hi RFC Editor Team, Tal, Thanks a lot for the edits. I also approve the doc, subject to a few changes - see inline on top of Tal's changes - and below (address change). Tal - note there is one delta between our comments - see inline. In addition, the editorial changes that were done to my address render it wrong. OLD: Frank Brockners Cisco Systems, Inc. 3rd Floor Hansaallee 249 40549 Duesseldorf Germany Email: fbrockne@cisco.com NEW Frank Brockners Cisco Systems, Inc. Hansaallee 249 40549 Duesseldorf Germany Email: fbrockne@cisco.com If you really want to mention the floor (I suggest to drop it), then it needs to go below the "Hansaallee 249": Frank Brockners Cisco Systems, Inc. Hansaallee 249 3rd Floor 40549 Duesseldorf Germany Email: fbrockne@cisco.com Thanks again, Frank > -----Original Message----- > From: Tal Mizrahi <tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com> > Sent: Saturday, 8 October 2022 13:59 > To: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org > Cc: haoyu.song@futurewei.com; gbarak@nvidia.com; Frank Brockners > (fbrockne) <fbrockne@cisco.com>; shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com; ippm- > ads@ietf.org; ippm-chairs@ietf.org; tpauly@apple.com; > martin.h.duke@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-11> > for your review > > Dear RFC Editor Team, > > Thanks for your work on this document. > I approve the document, subject to the comments below. > Please see my responses and comments inline, marked [TM]. > > Thanks, > Tal. > > On Sat, Oct 8, 2022 at 3:04 AM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > > > Authors, > > > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) > the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been updated as > follows: > > > > a) Abbreviations have been expanded per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC > > Style Guide"). > > > > b) The hyphen in "In-situ" has been removed to be consistent with > > recently published IOAM documents. Please review. > > > > Original: > > In-situ OAM Direct Exporting > > > > Current: > > In Situ Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (IOAM) Direct > > Exporting > > --> > > [TM] Looks good. > > > > > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] We had the following questions related to similar text in > > both the Abstract and Introduction: > > > > Original (Abstract): > > This document introduces a new IOAM option type (denoted > > IOAM-Option-Type) called the Direct Export (DEX) Option-Type, which is > > used as a trigger for IOAM data to be directly exported or locally > > aggregated without being pushed into in-flight data packets. > > > > Original (Introduction): > > This document defines a new IOAM-Option-Type called the Direct Export > > (DEX) Option-Type. This Option-Type is used as a trigger for IOAM > > nodes to locally aggregate and process IOAM data, and/or to export it > > to a receiving entity (or entities). > > > > > > a) We have updated mentions in the text above to use "IOAM Direct > > Export (DEX) Option-Type" to exactly match its use at > > https://www.iana.org/assignments/ioam/ioam.xhtml. Please let us know > > any objections and/or if similar changes should be made elsewhere in the > document (specifically the IANA Considerations section?). > > [TM] Looks good, and in my opinion there is no need for further changes. > > > > > b) There is some difference in the description of how the DEX > > Option-Type is used in the Intro and Abstract. Please let us know > > if/how these instances should be made consistent. > > [TM] I would be fine with the current text. In my opinion there is no need for the > abstract and introduction to be identical. > > > > > --> > > > > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We changed "Direct EXporting" to "Direct Exporting" for > consistency throughout the document. Please let us know of any objections. > > > > Original: > > DEX: Direct EXporting > > > > Current: > > DEX: Direct Exporting > > --> > > [TM] Looks good. > > > > > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We rearranged parts of this sentence and added more > > context (specifically to the content in parenthesis) for ease of the > > reader. Please let us know of any objections. > > > > Original: > > An IOAM encapsulating node configured to incorporate the DEX > > Option-Type encapsulates (possibly a subset of) the packets it > > forwards with the DEX Option-Type, and MAY export and/or collect the > > requested IOAM data immediately. > > > > Current: > > An IOAM encapsulating node configured to incorporate the DEX > > Option-Type encapsulates the packets (and possibly a subset of the > > packets) it forwards with the DEX Option-Type and MAY export and/or > > collect the requested IOAM data immediately. > > [TM] I suggest the following change: > OLD: > and possibly a subset > NEW: > or possibly a subset > > > > > --> > > > > > > 5) <!-- [rfced] Will readers know what "it" is referring to in this > > sentence? > > > > Original: > > Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX > > Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX > > Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are > > forwarded by it. > > > > Perhaps: > > Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX > > Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX > > Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are > > forwarded by the DEX Option-Type. > > --> > > > > [TM] Looks good. [FB] IMHO the new proposal is confusing to say the least. The new text could be read as if the DEX Option-Type would forward packets. Whereas it is the IOAM encapsulating node that forwards the packets. Suggestion: ORIGINAL: Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are forwarded by it. NEW: Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are forwarded by the IOAM encapsulating node. > > > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] We suggest rephrasing and condensing this sentence, as it may > be difficult to parse for some readers due to the number of adverbs. Would the > suggested text change the original meaning of the sentence? > > > > Original: > > As mentioned above, the data can be locally collected, and optionally > > can be aggregated and exported to a receiving entity, either > > proactively or on-demand. > > > > Perhaps: > > As mentioned above, the data can be locally collected, aggregated, and > > exported to a receiving entity proactively or on-demand. > > --> > > [TM] Yes, except that I suggest replacing "and" with "and/or". > > > > > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] FYI: In Section 3.2, we updated the terms "Optional > > fields", "Flow ID", and "Sequence Number" to fall under a nested > > definition list. Please confirm that this accurately describes > > the figure and let us know if there are any objections. > > --> > > [TM] Looks good. > > > > > > > 8) <!--[rfced] FYI - I-D.ietf-ippm-ioam-flags is in AUTH48 state. We have > > updated the reference in this document to point to the RFC-to-be info > > assuming that document will be published before this one. 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- [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-ippm-… rfc-editor
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… rfc-editor
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Tal Mizrahi
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Haoyu Song
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Frank Brockners (fbrockne)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Shwetha Bhandari
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Frank Brockners (fbrockne)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Barak Gafni