Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-11> for your review
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From: Shwetha Bhandari <shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com>
Date: Wed, 19 Oct 2022 11:20:16 +0530
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-11> for your review
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Hello RFC Editor Team, I approve the document too. I do not have further comments. Thanks, Shwetha On Wed, Oct 12, 2022 at 1:00 AM Frank Brockners (fbrockne) < fbrockne@cisco.com> wrote: > Hi RFC Editor Team, Tal, > > Thanks a lot for the edits. I also approve the doc, subject to a few > changes - see inline on top of Tal's changes - and below (address change). > > Tal - note there is one delta between our comments - see inline. > > In addition, the editorial changes that were done to my address render it > wrong. > > OLD: > Frank Brockners > Cisco Systems, Inc. > 3rd Floor > Hansaallee 249 > 40549 Duesseldorf > Germany > Email: fbrockne@cisco.com > > NEW > Frank Brockners > Cisco Systems, Inc. > Hansaallee 249 > 40549 Duesseldorf > Germany > Email: fbrockne@cisco.com > > If you really want to mention the floor (I suggest to drop it), then it > needs to go below the "Hansaallee 249": > Frank Brockners > Cisco Systems, Inc. > Hansaallee 249 > 3rd Floor > 40549 Duesseldorf > Germany > Email: fbrockne@cisco.com > > Thanks again, Frank > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Tal Mizrahi <tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com> > > Sent: Saturday, 8 October 2022 13:59 > > To: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org > > Cc: haoyu.song@futurewei.com; gbarak@nvidia.com; Frank Brockners > > (fbrockne) <fbrockne@cisco.com>; shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com; ippm- > > ads@ietf.org; ippm-chairs@ietf.org; tpauly@apple.com; > > martin.h.duke@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 > <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-11> > > for your review > > > > Dear RFC Editor Team, > > > > Thanks for your work on this document. > > I approve the document, subject to the comments below. > > Please see my responses and comments inline, marked [TM]. > > > > Thanks, > > Tal. > > > > On Sat, Oct 8, 2022 at 3:04 AM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > > > > > Authors, > > > > > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > necessary) > > the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > > > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been > updated as > > follows: > > > > > > a) Abbreviations have been expanded per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC > > > Style Guide"). > > > > > > b) The hyphen in "In-situ" has been removed to be consistent with > > > recently published IOAM documents. Please review. > > > > > > Original: > > > In-situ OAM Direct Exporting > > > > > > Current: > > > In Situ Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (IOAM) Direct > > > Exporting > > > --> > > > > [TM] Looks good. > > > > > > > > > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] We had the following questions related to similar text > in > > > both the Abstract and Introduction: > > > > > > Original (Abstract): > > > This document introduces a new IOAM option type (denoted > > > IOAM-Option-Type) called the Direct Export (DEX) Option-Type, which is > > > used as a trigger for IOAM data to be directly exported or locally > > > aggregated without being pushed into in-flight data packets. > > > > > > Original (Introduction): > > > This document defines a new IOAM-Option-Type called the Direct Export > > > (DEX) Option-Type. This Option-Type is used as a trigger for IOAM > > > nodes to locally aggregate and process IOAM data, and/or to export it > > > to a receiving entity (or entities). > > > > > > > > > a) We have updated mentions in the text above to use "IOAM Direct > > > Export (DEX) Option-Type" to exactly match its use at > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/ioam/ioam.xhtml__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!JQjsM3SadJmgep6JwmJachqnO73MJFLk3MGF0BekRpoXZWLepXWBrWvaaTKusmLBIh4lqIM01ApgRiBtzlSzVSajYg$ > . Please let us know > > > any objections and/or if similar changes should be made elsewhere in > the > > document (specifically the IANA Considerations section?). > > > > [TM] Looks good, and in my opinion there is no need for further changes. > > > > > > > > b) There is some difference in the description of how the DEX > > > Option-Type is used in the Intro and Abstract. Please let us know > > > if/how these instances should be made consistent. > > > > [TM] I would be fine with the current text. In my opinion there is no > need for the > > abstract and introduction to be identical. > > > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We changed "Direct EXporting" to "Direct > Exporting" for > > consistency throughout the document. Please let us know of any > objections. > > > > > > Original: > > > DEX: Direct EXporting > > > > > > Current: > > > DEX: Direct Exporting > > > --> > > > > [TM] Looks good. > > > > > > > > > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We rearranged parts of this sentence and added > more > > > context (specifically to the content in parenthesis) for ease of > the > > > reader. Please let us know of any objections. > > > > > > Original: > > > An IOAM encapsulating node configured to incorporate the DEX > > > Option-Type encapsulates (possibly a subset of) the packets it > > > forwards with the DEX Option-Type, and MAY export and/or collect the > > > requested IOAM data immediately. > > > > > > Current: > > > An IOAM encapsulating node configured to incorporate the DEX > > > Option-Type encapsulates the packets (and possibly a subset of the > > > packets) it forwards with the DEX Option-Type and MAY export and/or > > > collect the requested IOAM data immediately. > > > > [TM] I suggest the following change: > > OLD: > > and possibly a subset > > NEW: > > or possibly a subset > > > > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > 5) <!-- [rfced] Will readers know what "it" is referring to in this > > > sentence? > > > > > > Original: > > > Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX > > > Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX > > > Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are > > > forwarded by it. > > > > > > Perhaps: > > > Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX > > > Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX > > > Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are > > > forwarded by the DEX Option-Type. > > > --> > > > > > > > [TM] Looks good. > > [FB] IMHO the new proposal is confusing to say the least. The new text > could be read as if the DEX Option-Type would forward packets. Whereas it > is the IOAM encapsulating node that forwards the packets. > > Suggestion: > > ORIGINAL: > Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX > Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX > Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are > forwarded by it. > > NEW: > Therefore, an IOAM encapsulating node that supports the DEX > Option-Type MUST support the ability to incorporate the DEX > Option-Type selectively into a subset of the packets that are > forwarded by the IOAM encapsulating node. > > > > > > > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] We suggest rephrasing and condensing this sentence, as > it may > > be difficult to parse for some readers due to the number of adverbs. > Would the > > suggested text change the original meaning of the sentence? > > > > > > Original: > > > As mentioned above, the data can be locally collected, and optionally > > > can be aggregated and exported to a receiving entity, either > > > proactively or on-demand. > > > > > > Perhaps: > > > As mentioned above, the data can be locally collected, aggregated, and > > > exported to a receiving entity proactively or on-demand. > > > --> > > > > [TM] Yes, except that I suggest replacing "and" with "and/or". > > > > > > > > > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] FYI: In Section 3.2, we updated the terms "Optional > > > fields", "Flow ID", and "Sequence Number" to fall under a nested > > > definition list. Please confirm that this accurately describes > > > the figure and let us know if there are any objections. > > > --> > > > > [TM] Looks good. > > > > > > > > > > > 8) <!--[rfced] FYI - I-D.ietf-ippm-ioam-flags is in AUTH48 state. We > have > > > updated the reference in this document to point to the RFC-to-be > info > > > assuming that document will be published before this one. 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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… rfc-editor
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Tal Mizrahi
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Haoyu Song
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Frank Brockners (fbrockne)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Shwetha Bhandari
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Frank Brockners (fbrockne)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9326 <draft-ietf-i… Barak Gafni