Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9448 <draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-tnauthlist-13> for your review

Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> Thu, 17 August 2023 17:28 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9448 <draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-tnauthlist-13> for your review
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Hi Jon,

This is a friendly reminder that we await your review and approval prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.

The files have been posted here (please refresh):
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.xml
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.txt
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.html
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.pdf

The relevant diff files have been posted here:
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https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)

For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9448

Thank you,
RFC Editor/ap

> On Aug 10, 2023, at 10:52 AM, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi David,
> 
> We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9448
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/ap
> 
>> On Aug 9, 2023, at 11:17 PM, David Hancock <davidhancock.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Alanna,
>> 
>> Thanks for the updates -- I now approve this RFC for publication.
>> 
>> David
>> 
>> On Wed, Aug 9, 2023 at 2:59 PM Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
>> Hi David,
>> 
>> Thank you for your reply. Your affiliation has been updated.
>> 
>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.xml
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.txt
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.html
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.pdf
>> 
>> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-lastdiff.html (htmlwdiff diff between last version and this)
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-lastrfcdiff.html (rfcdiff between last version and this)
>> 
>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9448
>> 
>> Thank you,
>> RFC Editor/ap
>> 
>>> On Aug 9, 2023, at 10:16 AM, David Hancock <davidhancock.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>> 
>>> I would like to update my company name from Comcast to Somos Inc. in two places...
>>> 
>>> ---
>>> On title page authors list:
>>> 
>>> OLD:
>>> old text
>>>  D. Hancock
>>>  Comcast
>>> 
>>> NEW:
>>> new text
>>>  D. Hancock
>>>  Somos Inc.
>>> 
>>> On the last page list of Authors' Addresses
>>> OLD:
>>> old text
>>>   David Hancock
>>>   Comcast
>>>   United States of America
>>>   Email: 
>>> davidhancock.ietf@gmail.com
>>> NEW:
>>> new text
>>>   David Hancock
>>>   Somos Inc.
>>>   United States of America
>>>   Email: 
>>> davidhancock.ietf@gmail.com
>>> ---
>>> 
>>> Thanks
>>> David
>>> 
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>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.form.xml
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>>> --------------------------------------
>>> RFC9448 (draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-tnauthlist-13)
>>> 
>>> Title            : TNAuthList profile of ACME Authority Token
>>> Author(s)        : C. Wendt, D. Hancock, M. Barnes, J. Peterson
>>> WG Chair(s)      : Deb Cooley, Deb Cooley, Yoav Nir
>>> Area Director(s) : Roman Danyliw, Paul Wouters
>>> 
>>> 
>> 
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