Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9448 <draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-tnauthlist-13> for your review

Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> Thu, 24 August 2023 18:30 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9448 <draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-tnauthlist-13> for your review
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Hi Jon,

This is another friendly reminder that we await your review and approval prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.

The files have been posted here (please refresh):
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.xml
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.txt
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.html
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.pdf

The relevant diff files have been posted here:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)

For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9448

Thank you,
RFC Editor/ap

> On Aug 17, 2023, at 10:27 AM, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Jon,
> 
> This is a friendly reminder that we await your review and approval prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.
> 
> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.xml
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.pdf
> 
> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)
> 
> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9448
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/ap
> 
>> On Aug 10, 2023, at 10:52 AM, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi David,
>> 
>> We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9448
>> 
>> Thank you,
>> RFC Editor/ap
>> 
>>> On Aug 9, 2023, at 11:17 PM, David Hancock <davidhancock.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Alanna,
>>> 
>>> Thanks for the updates -- I now approve this RFC for publication.
>>> 
>>> David
>>> 
>>> On Wed, Aug 9, 2023 at 2:59 PM Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
>>> Hi David,
>>> 
>>> Thank you for your reply. Your affiliation has been updated.
>>> 
>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.xml
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.txt
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448.pdf
>>> 
>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-lastdiff.html (htmlwdiff diff between last version and this)
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9448-lastrfcdiff.html (rfcdiff between last version and this)
>>> 
>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9448
>>> 
>>> Thank you,
>>> RFC Editor/ap
>>> 
>>>> On Aug 9, 2023, at 10:16 AM, David Hancock <davidhancock.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> I would like to update my company name from Comcast to Somos Inc. in two places...
>>>> 
>>>> ---
>>>> On title page authors list:
>>>> 
>>>> OLD:
>>>> old text
>>>> D. Hancock
>>>> Comcast
>>>> 
>>>> NEW:
>>>> new text
>>>> D. Hancock
>>>> Somos Inc.
>>>> 
>>>> On the last page list of Authors' Addresses
>>>> OLD:
>>>> old text
>>>>  David Hancock
>>>>  Comcast
>>>>  United States of America
>>>>  Email: 
>>>> davidhancock.ietf@gmail.com
>>>> NEW:
>>>> new text
>>>>  David Hancock
>>>>  Somos Inc.
>>>>  United States of America
>>>>  Email: 
>>>> davidhancock.ietf@gmail.com
>>>> ---
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks
>>>> David
>>>> 
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>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>> RFC9448 (draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-tnauthlist-13)
>>>> 
>>>> Title            : TNAuthList profile of ACME Authority Token
>>>> Author(s)        : C. Wendt, D. Hancock, M. Barnes, J. Peterson
>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Deb Cooley, Deb Cooley, Yoav Nir
>>>> Area Director(s) : Roman Danyliw, Paul Wouters
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>> 
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