Re: [auth48] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id-29> for your review
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Subject: Re: [auth48] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id-29> for your review
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Karen, 9331's now fine. Thank you. Bob On 13/01/2023 18:08, Karen Moore wrote: > Hi Bob, > > Per your request, we have updated our files to reflect the changes > below; please review. You do not need to provide approval again. > > >> [BB4] yes please. In fact, in 9331, pls use the additional words >> below, which are similar to 9330: >> >> CURRENT: >> Prague [PRAGUE-CC >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.html#I-D.briscoe-iccrg-prague-congestion-control>] [PragueLinux >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.html#PragueLinux>], >> BBRv2 [BBRv2 >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.html#BBRv2>] [BBR-CC >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.html#I-D.cardwell-iccrg-bbr-congestion-control>], >> and... >> PROPOSED: >> Prague *for TCP and QUIC* [PRAGUE-CC >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.html#I-D.briscoe-iccrg-prague-congestion-control>] [PragueLinux >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.html#PragueLinux>], *the >> L4S ECN >> part of Bottleneck Bandwidth and Round-trip propagation time >> (*BBRv2*)* [BBRv2 >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.html#BBRv2>] [BBR-CC >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.html#I-D.cardwell-iccrg-bbr-congestion-control>], >> and... > > > Files (please refresh): > > The updated XML file is here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.xml > > The updated output files are here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.html > > These diff files show all changes made during AUTH48: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-auth48diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > These diff files show changes made during the last editing round: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-lastdiff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side) > > This diff file shows all changes made to date: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-diff.html > > Best regards, > > RFC Editor/kc > >> On Jan 11, 2023, at 2:04 PM, Karen Moore <kmoore@amsl.com> wrote: >> >> Hi Martin and authors*, >> >> Thank you for your reply; we have noted your approval on the AUTH48 >> status page for this document. We now have all necessary approvals >> and will move this document forward in the publication process (along >> with the C350 companion documents). >> >> *Authors - please note that the bug affecting the RFC reference >> entries has been fixed (i.e., “and RFC Publisher” is no longer >> present in the entries). Also, for the RFC-to-be 9330 entry in the >> Informative References section, we removed “Braun” from "Marcelo >> Bagnulo Braun" to match how his name appears in the document (so it >> is now reflected as "Bagnulo, M." instead of "Bagnulo Braun, M.”). >> And we updated the title of RFC-to-be 9332 to match the edited document. >> >> Note: all hidden comments in this document (and the companion docs) >> will be deleted before publication. >> >> Files (please refresh): >> >> The updated XML file is here: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.xml >> >> The updated output files are here: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.txt >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.pdf >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.html >> >> These diff files show all changes made during AUTH48: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-auth48diff.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-rfcdiff.html (side by side) >> >> These diff files show changes made during the last editing round: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-lastdiff.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-lastrfcdiff.html (side by >> side) >> >> This diff file shows all changes made to date: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-diff.html >> >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9331 >> >> It has been a pleasure working with this group; thank you for your time! >> >> Best regards, >> >> RFC Editor/kc >> >>> On Jan 11, 2023, at 9:53 AM, Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com> >>> wrote: >>> >>> Approved. >>> >>> On Mon, Jan 9, 2023 at 12:08 PM Karen Moore <kmoore@amsl.com> wrote: >>> Hi Bob, Koen, and Martin (AD)*, >>> >>> Thank you for your replies. Our files have been updated to reflect >>> Bob’s changes, and we have removed the hyphen from one 1 instance of >>> “mis-use” per Koen’s suggestion. We have not made any further >>> changes in regard to “P12”; if you would like to, please let us >>> know. We also noted Koen’s approval of the document on the AUTH48 >>> status page. >>> >>> *Martin, please review the expansions that were added in Sections 1, >>> 1.1, 1.3, 6.1, and 6.2 and let us know if you approve or if any >>> further edits are needed. You can view the changes here: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-lastdiff.html. >>> >>> -------- >>> FILES >>> (Please refresh) >>> >>> The updated XML file is here: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.xml >>> >>> The updated output files are here: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.txt >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.pdf >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331.html >>> >>> These diff files show all changes made during AUTH48: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-auth48diff.html >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-rfcdiff.html (side by side) >>> >>> These diff files show only changes made during the last editing round: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-lastdiff.html >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-lastrfcdiff.html (side by >>> side) >>> >>> This diff file shows all changes made to date: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9331-diff.html >>> >>> Please contact us with any further updates or with your approval of >>> the document in its current form. We will await approval from >>> Martin prior to moving forward in the publication process. >>> >>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9331 >>> >>> Best regards, >>> >>> RFC Editor/kc >>> >>> >>>> On Jan 9, 2023, at 6:51 AM, Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net> wrote: >>>> >>>> Koen, >>>> >>>> I agree with 'misuse', >>>> >>>> PI2 wasn't forgotten; it's more a question of whether it should be >>>> included in a list of AQM methods that predated this draft. I >>>> didn't think it should.... >>>> ...When looked at one way, it should, and I imagine you're wanting >>>> to give PI2 the same status as the other AQMs. But the position of >>>> PI2 relative to DualPI2 is probably a source of confusion for most >>>> people, so I think it's best to rely on the explanation later in >>>> this draft, otherwise, introducing PI2 here before the explanation >>>> will cause most readers to get confused, or at minimum, to do a >>>> double-take. >>>> >>>> >>>> Bob >>>> >>>> On 08/01/2023 14:35, Koen De Schepper (Nokia) wrote: >>>>> Hi Bob, Karen, >>>>> >>>>> I just did a read throughout the whole document again and I saw >>>>> only following nits which could be added/changed: >>>>> >>>>> Didn’t we forgot to mention PI2 in this list? >>>>> More recent state-of-the-art AQM methods, such as Flow Queue >>>>> CoDel [RFC8290], >>>>> Proportional Integral controller Enhanced (PIE) [RFC8033], >>>>> Proportional Integral Improved with a square [PI2] or Adaptive RED >>>>> [ARED01], ... >>>>> >>>>> Mis-use -> misuse? Intentionally or was it a hyphen leftover from >>>>> a line-wrap? >>>>> Approaches to assure the integrity of signals using the new >>>>> identifier are introduced in Appendix C.1. See the security >>>>> considerations in the L4S architecture [RFC9330] for further >>>>> discussion of mis-use of the identifier, as well as extensive >>>>> discussion of policing rate and latency in regard to L4S. >>>>> >>>>> I’ll let you sort out the acronym expansion (as I don’t have a >>>>> strong preference). So independent of the acceptance of the above >>>>> nits and acronym settlement, I can already approve this document. >>>>> >>>>> Thanks, >>>>> Koen. >>>>> >>>>> From: Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net> >>>>> Sent: Saturday, January 7, 2023 6:25 PM >>>>> To: Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>; Karen Moore >>>>> <kmoore@amsl.com> >>>>> Cc: Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>; Koen De Schepper >>>>> (Nokia)<koen.de_schepper@nokia-bell-labs.com>; RFC Editor >>>>> <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; tsvwg-ads@ietf.org; >>>>> tsvwg-chairs@ietf.org; Wesley Eddy <wes@mti-systems.com>; >>>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >>>>> Subject: Re: [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 >>>>> <draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id-29> for your review >>>>> >>>>> Martin and Karen, >>>>> >>>>> I've re-expanded the remaining abbreviations in the att'd XML, as >>>>> I said I would in my email below: >>>>> rfc9331j.xml >>>>> Also, I've att'd the diff from Karen's latest edit (which I've >>>>> denoted as "rfc9331i"): >>>>> rfc9331j-from-i.diff.html >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Bob >>>>> >>>>> On 07/01/2023 16:35, Bob Briscoe wrote: >>>>> Martin (and Karen,) >>>>> >>>>> On 06/01/2023 18:47, Martin Duke wrote: >>>>> Bob, >>>>> >>>>> In case this was lost in the holiday shuffle, the ball is in your >>>>> court. >>>>> >>>>> [BB3] Thanks. I had read all the emails, but it wasn't clear to me >>>>> that I had been given the edit token on ecn-l4s-id. >>>>> I will set to re-expanding some abbreviations in the XML now. This >>>>> is the approach I shall take: >>>>> >>>>> For the example list of transport protocols in the intro, I will >>>>> go back to the RFC Editor's first approach of expanding the >>>>> "non-core" protocol names, instead of including citations for DCCP >>>>> and SCTP (which are cited later when each protocol is actually >>>>> discussed). >>>>> >>>>> 1. Intro. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> CURRENT: >>>>> The transport wire protocol, e.g., TCP, >>>>> QUIC, SCTP [RFC4960], DCCP [RFC4340], or RTP/RTCP, is orthogonal >>>>> (and >>>>> therefore not suitable for distinguishing L4S from Classic packets). >>>>> >>>>> PROPOSED: >>>>> The transport wire protocol, e.g., TCP, >>>>> QUIC, the Stream Control Transmission Protocol (SCTP), the Datagram >>>>> Congestion Control Protocol (DCCP), and RTP/RTCP, is orthogonal (and >>>>> therefore not suitable for distinguishing L4S from Classic packets). >>>>> >>>>> 1.1. Latency, Loss, and Scaling Problems >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> For the list of AQMs, I'll take a similar approach to that you've >>>>> just approved for the DualQ draft, except RED has already been >>>>> expanded at this point. Specifically: >>>>> >>>>> CURRENT: >>>>> However, Random Early Detection (RED) and other algorithms from >>>>> the 1990s were sensitive... >>>>> ... >>>>> More recent state-of-the-art AQM methods, such as FQ-CoDel >>>>> [RFC8290], >>>>> PIE [RFC8033], or Adaptive RED [ARED01],... >>>>> ... >>>>> This was useful because per-flow queuing (FQ) .... >>>>> >>>>> PROPOSED: >>>>> However, Random Early Detection (RED) and other algorithms from >>>>> the 1990s were sensitive... >>>>> ... >>>>> More recent state-of-the-art AQM methods, such as Flow Queue >>>>> CoDel [RFC8290], >>>>> Proportional Integral controller Enhanced (PIE) [RFC8033], or >>>>> Adaptive RED [ARED01], ... >>>>> ... >>>>> This was useful because per-flow queuing (FQ) ... >>>>> >>>>> Deeper into the Document >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> I'll add back expansions of EH, ESP, TRILL etc. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Bob >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> On Wed, Dec 28, 2022 at 10:24 AM Martin Duke >>>>> <martin.h.duke@gmail.com> wrote: >>>>> I'm sympathetic to the desire to keep sentences brisk, but I find >>>>> the idea that these acronyms are stashed in the references list to >>>>> be reader-hostile. Would it be too much to ask for a short >>>>> glossary just after the introduction to spell these out? >>>>> >>>>> On Thu, Dec 22, 2022 at 4:27 PM Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net> >>>>> wrote: >>>>> Gorry, >>>>> >>>>> On 22/12/2022 09:20, Gorry Fairhurst wrote: >>>>> On 21/12/2022 21:46, Bob Briscoe wrote: >>>>> Martin, >>>>> >>>>> On 20/12/2022 19:24, Martin Duke wrote: >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> On Sat, Dec 17, 2022 at 7:16 AM Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net> >>>>> wrote: >>>>> Martin, >>>>> >>>>> On 16/12/2022 23:22, Martin Duke wrote: >>>>> There is a lot of email about this; pardon me if it's been >>>>> thoroughly discussed: >>>>> >>>>> (1) I don't understand why we edited out introducing acronyms on >>>>> first use: >>>>> DCTCP, FQ-Codel, PIE, TRILL, EH, ESP >>>>> >>>>> [BB] We persuaded the RFC Editor to expand or not on a >>>>> case-by-case basis rather than following an "expand-on-first-use" >>>>> rule too rigidly. >>>>> Before the RFC Editor process, we had judged that these particular >>>>> ones were: >>>>> * better known by their abbreviation than their expansion >>>>> * easily look-up-able for anyone interested in the expansion, via >>>>> the title of the reference cited beside them >>>>> * and they were within a sentence that was already long, so an >>>>> (unnecessary) expansion would make it overly long and complicated. >>>>> >>>>> In the case of DCTCP, it's expansion adds important context, but >>>>> the first use is in an already complex sentence. So, at the first >>>>> use it says "the DCTCP/DualQ solution described below", and it is >>>>> expanded in the next para. >>>>> >>>>> Also, FQ is expanded elsewhere 'cos it's meaning is important, but >>>>> CoDel is only expanded in the cited title of its reference. >>>>> >>>>> OK, you've clearly thought through the sequencing here. I'm not >>>>> going to insist on first-use, but I do think these acronym >>>>> expansions should be somewhere in the document, either in a >>>>> glossary or in subsequent use, as you've done with DCTCP. >>>>> >>>>> [BB2] Does "somewhere in the document" include in the title of a >>>>> reference cited where the abbreviation is first used (e.g. DCCP >>>>> [RFC4340])? >>>>> I've tried to only do this where the expansion isn't central to >>>>> understanding the document, and expanding it on first use >>>>> subtracts from the sense of the sentence. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Bob >>>>> Before a draft leaves the TSVWG, we would normally check that all >>>>> acronyms are expanded on their first use within the body of the >>>>> text (the abstract is treated separately and needs to have its own >>>>> definitions). I still think this is an important, rather than >>>>> requiring readers to consult another document to understand if >>>>> they have correctly interpreted an acronym. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> [BB] We're not saying anyone has to consult another document - >>>>> just consult the title of the reference cited in /this/ document. >>>>> And this is only for any abbreviation that: >>>>> 1. is known by it's abbreviation (by those familiar with it) >>>>> 2. would make a sentence in the intro hard to follow if all >>>>> abbreviations were expanded >>>>> 3. is only mentioned in passing so it isn't necessary for >>>>> understanding the document. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> On this document, I leave it to Martin to decide whether there is >>>>> reason to do otherwise. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> [BB] Yup. >>>>> Thanks >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Bob >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Gorry >>>>> >>>>> (TSVWG Co-Chair) >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> (2) This edit in Sec 5.1 seems non-cosmetic. >>>>> In case unforeseen problems arise with the L4S experiment, it MUST be >>>>> possible to configure an L4S implementation to disable the L4S >>>>> treatment. Once disabled, all packets of all ECN codepoints will >>>>> receive Classic treatment, and ECT(1) packets MUST be treated as >>>>> if they >>>>> were Not-ECT. >>>>> I agree that the original text was ambiguously worded, but the >>>>> common-sense reading of the original (given that this is a section >>>>> about network nodes) is that ECT(1) would >>>>> go in the ECT(0) queue and be marked CE in accordance with the RFC >>>>> 3168 rules. The new text is different. I can see advantages to the >>>>> new rule but I wonder if we have >>>>> consensus for this change? >>>>> >>>>> [BB] Yes, but common sense might be in short supply. "Classic >>>>> treatment" could be incorrectly taken to mean "Classic ECN treatment". >>>>> This sentence went through an intermediate version, which you >>>>> might prefer because it stays closer to the original: >>>>> >>>>> In case unforeseen problems arise with the L4S experiment, it MUST be >>>>> possible to configure an L4S implementation to disable the L4S >>>>> treatment. Once disabled, all packets of all ECN codepoints will >>>>> receive Classic treatment, and ECT(1) packets MUST be treated as >>>>> if they >>>>> were Not-ECT, then all packets of all ECN codepoints will >>>>> receive treatment compatible with Classic congestion control. >>>>> >>>>> But, in the most recent edits, I asked the RFC Editor to take out >>>>> the final clause completely at the suggestion of my co-authors. >>>>> We can leave it in if you'd rather. >>>>> >>>>> I think I ave misinterpreted the diff. This is fine as-is. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> -- >>>>> ________________________________________________________________ >>>>> Bob Briscoe http://bobbriscoe.net/ >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> -- >>>>> ________________________________________________________________ >>>>> Bob Briscoe http://bobbriscoe.net/ >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> -- >>>>> ________________________________________________________________ >>>>> Bob Briscoe http://bobbriscoe.net/ >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> -- >>>>> ________________________________________________________________ >>>>> Bob Briscoe http://bobbriscoe.net/ >>>> >>>> -- >>>> ________________________________________________________________ >>>> Bob Briscoe >>>> http://bobbriscoe.net/ >>> >> > -- ________________________________________________________________ Bob Briscoehttp://bobbriscoe.net/
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- Re: [auth48] [AD] Re: [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 93… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [auth48] [AD] Re: [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 93… Martin Duke
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Karen Moore
- Re: [auth48] [AD] Re: [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 93… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Karen Moore
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Karen Moore
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Karen Moore
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Bob Briscoe
- [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <draf… Karen Moore
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Karen Moore
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Bob Briscoe
- [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <draf… Karen Moore
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Martin Duke
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Martin Duke
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Gorry Fairhurst
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Martin Duke
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Martin Duke
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Koen De Schepper (Nokia)
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Karen Moore
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Martin Duke
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <… Karen Moore
- [auth48] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <draft-iet… Karen Moore
- Re: [auth48] [C350] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9331 <draft… Bob Briscoe