[babel] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09
Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 04 May 2021 17:39 UTC
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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2021-05-04 IETF LC End Date: 2021-04-22 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: A well written text that is ready for publication. Just one note and a couple of minor nits. Major issues: None Minor issues: 5. Acknowledgements Juliusz Chroboczek provided most of the example configurations for babel that are shown in the Appendix. The Appendix seems seems quite substantive, I am surprised that Juliusz was not listed as an author. Nits/editorial comments: 2.1. Information Model " attributes are marked a read-only objects in the information module" SB> s/marked a/marked as/ 2.3. YANG Module "On other hand, for a" SB> s/On other hand/On the other hand/
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