[core] Chair's review of draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-02.txt
Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Wed, 20 February 2019 14:59 UTC
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Subject: [core] Chair's review of draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-02.txt
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In preparation for the impending working-group last call, I have reviewed draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-02.txt. Substantive comments are below; a set of small editorial comments is going to the authors in parallel. # Minor 1. The text of the draft does not contain an argument that the application of Patch Packs is idempotent. It probably should. 2. The text sometimes says "iPATCH" where it probably should be saying "PATCH and iPATCH". This should be checked throughout. 3. The term "resource" is sometimes used in lieu of "subset of SenML records that, when resolved, match a given name". Grüße, Carsten
- [core] Chair's review of draft-ietf-core-senml-et… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] Chair's review of draft-ietf-core-senm… Ari Keränen
- [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senml-et… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Christian Amsüss
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Klaus Hartke
- [core] Separate formats for fetch and patch (was:… Christian Amsüss
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Ari Keränen
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Ari Keränen
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] Separate formats for fetch and patch (… Christian M. Amsüss
- Re: [core] Separate formats for fetch and patch (… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Klaus Hartke
- [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: draft-i… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: dra… Ivaylo Petrov
- [core] clashin prefix Re: [netmod] 🔔 WG Last Call… tom petch
- Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of COREC… tom petch
- Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of COREC… tom petch
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: dra… Peter van der Stok
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: dra… Andy Bierman
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: dra… Ivaylo Petrov
- Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of COREC… Ivaylo Petrov
- Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of COREC… tom petch
- Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of COREC… Ivaylo Petrov
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